[Report This]Date: February 26 2012 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 28: We All Scream for Ice Cream
you got me, maximus...what a great argument as to why im the one who needs to grow...it sure is clear. but in reality, my comment was harsh, and the story..stories..are very excellent
[Report This]Date: February 25 2012 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 28: We All Scream for Ice Cream
awesome chapter, my friend.
[Report This]Date: February 24 2012 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 28: We All Scream for Ice Cream
Wow Jack doesn't want it to end. Doesn't want to leave his Aphrodite. Well I guess Carly finally truly broke Jacks will.
Dave
Date: February 24 2012 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 28: We All Scream for Ice Cream
Ahhhhh broken! So, did she hear that or will she swallow him down and bring him back up? I think she heard and will spit him out. I also think Aphrodite is the passsword? Perhaps? Excellent excellent story. Carly hasn't won yet though, Sophie is still lurking about, dang it. Or maybe Sophie will rescue Jack only to hear him tell her he wants to be with Carly. You can usually guess how these stories will go but you've done an excellent job of keeping the reader guessing. Kudos!
Author's Response:
i'm glad to know the ending hasn't been projected in neon letters by these preceding chapters. hope you enjoy what's to come
Date: February 24 2012 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 28: We All Scream for Ice Cream
Wow, that's one of the best mouth scenes you've done yet! Very good. :)
I'm still quite interested in how exactly you plan to end this... Something tells me you've still got some surprises up your sleeve. Anyway, looking forward to seeing more~
Author's Response:
thanks, it was definitely one of the most fun mouthplay scenes i've gotten to write yet. and you are correct, i've got a couple more fun surprises coming up before things close out ;)
Date: February 24 2012 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 28: We All Scream for Ice Cream
Pour Jack got himself in a heap of a picke, ain't no way he's gettin out of this bucket o syrup...
Date: February 24 2012 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 28: We All Scream for Ice Cream
I think she will vomit him back, just scaring him even more than he need it. hah Oh, the tension and anxiety are killing me! What will happen? How it will end? :(
@The_Darkness: I'm on Jackie team! I really wish he can gain freedom and don't lose his humanity. :( Go jackie-poo! :D But I can't help but to wish a happy ending for both of them, I have a special like for fraternal love, hope Carly take conscience of her actions towards her brother and try to redeem herself. xD
[Report This]Date: February 24 2012 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 28: We All Scream for Ice Cream
Fantastic! Like any good story, I can't tell if I enjoy the suspense or the action more, but you're amazing at executing both. I hope you pursue writing as a career (or already have done so).
Date: February 24 2012 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 28: We All Scream for Ice Cream
Okay why is everyone on the website so crule to the protaganists. they are supposed to over come the odds and topple evil not be defeated by an evil bitch who deserves to be shrunk