Date: February 14 2012 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later
YES! I want that Carly bitch to die!
Or maybe enter into servitude under Princess Chloe...(emphasis on under)
See what you can do.
[Report This]Date: February 14 2012 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later
Dear Jack i've been reading your stories for a while and havnt had an account on here so I never could review but now tht I do i'd like to personally tell u u rock! Haha u are a credit to the giantess community and u are a great writer ur fine tuning and specific personality tht u put into ur writing really stands out. I love ur stuff and really hope you continue making stories for a long time thanx soo much for all the time you put into our comunity sincerely, dopeman
Date: February 14 2012 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 23: A Little More Blackmail
Wow. I think this is the first time that I'm reading a story here out of pure interest how the protagonist's fate is going to evolve. I'm totally not into all the foot stuff and the chapters 21+22 made me worry that your story stopped to go anywhere.
But this chapter 23 is just plain awesome. I was smiling all the time and got more and more excited to see Jacks plan unfold, absolutely great how you let that build itself up gradually. I surely haven't read every story on this site, but I've been a silent reader for a long time and this is by far the best and most thrilling bit of text that I've seen here. Well, "best" in the sense that it absolutely glued me to the screen, not that it was the biggest turn-on of all ;)
Really, congratulations and a big thank you. I'm baffled and so looking forward to Carly's reaction. Btw, loved your response "i guess that will depend on whether or not carly kills him in the next few seconds ;)" ^^
[Report This]Date: February 14 2012 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later
Terrific installment. Above all, I really enjoy the psychological elements in this series. I was actually just thinking the other day that Jack's gotta be getting pretty screwed up mentally by this point. Glad to see he is.
Date: February 14 2012 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 23: A Little More Blackmail
Gosh, simply... wow! Can't wait to see her face in the next chapter!! :D
Date: February 14 2012 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 23: A Little More Blackmail
Is he finally gonna be free man?
Author's Response:
i guess that will depend on whether or not carly kills him in the next few seconds ;)
[Report This]Date: February 14 2012 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 22: Return to the White Room
One of the best chapters yet, man. GJ My only wish was that there were more of these "flashbacks" sprinkled thoughout part 3. How you continually come up with such awesome stuff makes you one of the best authors on here, dude.
As for the chapter, loved it.
Author's Response:
I hear ya on the flashback thing; you'll probably see a bit more of that in part 4, though, rather than this one at some point. glad you enjoyed it!
Date: February 14 2012 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later
Somehow I think she is really attached to him by now, maybe even can't live without him in some kind of twisted love. I'm curious about how she felt at time when discovered she had lost him a few chapters back. Afraid of being discovered and face consequences or afraid of never being able to play and be together with her tiny brother anymore. That part of her noticeably jealous of him 'in love' with other girl other than her was kinda disturbing. :) Just my thoughts.
Do you already have the entire conclusion of the story in mind? Will gonna happen in this Little Blackmail 3?
I like very much your writing and style, each story is very engaging and completely different from each other.
Date: February 13 2012 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later
This was... interesting. The story has pretty much devolved into foot, crush, repeat, hasn't it? If there is going to be something more, please inform me. I do have other options in whacking material.
Author's Response:
i normally see no need to defend my stories, but as long as we're taking unnecessary swings at each other's respective preferences, if this story's devolved content isn't getting you your fix then i encourage you to go find a clogged toilet tale to get it. nobody would blame you
Date: February 12 2012 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later
I had hoped that Sophie would save him from Carly but it looks unlikely though I am hoping that she'll shrink Carly down to her brother's size so she can exact some revenge. Doubt Jack will ever reach normal size again though.
[Report This]Date: February 12 2012 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 22: Return to the White Room
I literally just registered just to throw you a review. I've been following your writing since some of your earliest stories, and please know that I'm not exaggerating when I state that you have some serious writing talent. Never before have I seen an online author with the ability to give such dimension to his characters, to write such a compelling entertaining story, to give so generously his writings and ask for nothing in return.
There have been many days when I have come home feeling sad, and though you cannot expect a short story to lift your spirits to their peak, I would be lying if I said that viewing your name on "Most Recent" didn't put a smile on my face. I'd just like to say thanks, your stories really make my day a lot better and you're a fantastic author.
p.s.: I really like these types of chapters. It's a pretty awesome variation compared to the average size play.
Author's Response:
wow, i feel a little humbled. i'm glad you enjoy the stories so much. i get what you mean about these sorts of things being able to give a smile, sometimes all one really needs is a fun little fantasy (no pun intended) to make the gloom go away. i hope you continue to like what you read, and i hope you'll comment again sometime, i always appreciate reader thoughts
Date: February 11 2012 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 21: Back in Sissy's Clutches
It's so creepy when she says she loves him, even more than anything.
Author's Response:
good. that's the intention ;)
Date: February 11 2012 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 21: Back in Sissy's Clutches
ahhh. back home with Carly.
Author's Response:
no place like home, right?
[Report This]Date: February 11 2012 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 21: Back in Sissy's Clutches
Wow. A bona fide death threat. Jack is screwed. Great chapter.
Dave
[Report This]Date: February 11 2012 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 18: When Giant Cousins Attack
Wow great chapter as usual. Jack seems to be in more trouble than ever. Chloe is nuts.
Dave
Date: February 10 2012 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 1: Five Years Later
Ahhh, back where he belongs. Maybe this will teach Carly not to be so careless with her things. The situation is getting risky for Carly, too many people finding out about Jack and she isn't even aware Sophie knows yet. I don't think a verbal warning to Chloe is sufficient, I see another tiny pet for her in the future, that will keep her quiet. Then Carly and Chloe can even have play dates with their toys! Going to be interesting to see how you tie this up.
[Report This]Date: February 10 2012 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 20: Feeding Time
Nice twist. I think it works cuz around that age would be like the chapter. Big over small and would relate to a doll. It's a natural fit should we say, take care of doll but don't know its real. Imo she should have done a different "hiding place" like hide him in her shoes or say unaware in Sophie socks or carlys shoes. Kinda past the "everything gos in the mouth" Altho intresting in being back with carly so soon. Kinda takes Sophie off the hook, leading to maybe sneak prison break out and only place is to hide in footware.
[Report This]Date: February 09 2012 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 20: Feeding Time
*picks jaw up off the floor*
holy shit. how, just how, did carly manage to show up at that instant? i almost wonder if she secretly planned this whole thing with here cousins, in an effort to rekindle the fight in him?
either way, if the past 5 years werent bad enough, jack is about to become royally screwed now.
[Report This]Date: February 09 2012 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 20: Feeding Time
Another great chapter. Glad to see Carly back in control. I always root for the bad guy (or girl).
Date: February 09 2012 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 20: Feeding Time
No! I was starting to like Chloe!