[Report This]Date: February 03 2015 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 22: Unsportsmanlike Assault
I hope Ms. Watson doesn't prove to be one of those easily-bribed teachers. Assuming, of course, that Sharon comes from a plutocratic family.
Author's Response:
Don't worry, Ms. Watson can't be bought. Though that's not to say she won't present problems on her own without the need of Sharon's influence.
Date: February 02 2015 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 22: Unsportsmanlike Assault
Love this story and I'm so glad you've started it back up! The volleyball chapter was great, except I don't think Amy would've been let off so easily in real life! Oh well- I'd assume it just leads to the drama of the whole situation! This chapter actually reminds me of my own giant tiny story 'I Wish I Was Normal'. Peter is an adorable little guy and I hope Amy and Sharon don't do something drastic!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing. You may be right about Amy, although the majority of players are inexperienced enough that it could still be written off as an accident. Sharon hasn't done anything truly drastic yet, but she may have something cooking.
Date: February 01 2015 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 22: Unsportsmanlike Assault
While she retains a scary kind of attractiveness, whenever I try to visualize Sharon's eyes, I somehow always think of Christopher Walken.
Author's Response:
Well, that's a new one. I suppose they're both fairly off-putting people, aren't they?
[Report This]Date: February 01 2015 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 22: Unsportsmanlike Assault
I forgot how much I liked this story. Can't believe I haven't been commenting.
It was nice to bone up on my volleyball vernacular with dig and such. Lisa should be glad a sore cheek was all she got from such a severe spike, could've gotten a broken nose and black eye.
Anyways, I'm looking forward to what happens next and I'm also liking that Ms. Watson seems to be treating him better whatever that may mean I'm enjoying the possibilities.
Also can't wait to see his mom again.
aaron
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! Lisa did luck out a bit. Peter may not be as big a fan of Watson's treatment though. His mom will appear again in a matter of chapters.
Date: February 01 2015 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 22: Unsportsmanlike Assault
Fine chap! Amy is Sharon is Sharon's henchwoman but Kimmy seems more naive than bully gang-type. Good to see friendship grow btw Peter n Lisa!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks! You're on the right track the roles of Amy and Kimmy.