[Report This]Date: February 09 2015 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 24: Second Practice
Something tells me Lisa knew what kind of question Peter was going to pop. ;-)
Author's Response:
She probably did. Unfortunately, both were a little too bashful to have done anything about it in that moment.
[Report This]Date: February 09 2015 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 24: Second Practice
Yay! Awesome chapter! You're really good at writing, I can't wait to see more!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading/reviewing!
[Report This]Date: February 09 2015 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 24: Second Practice
“Trust me. You have no idea what that feels like.”
This sentence seems a little off. Did you mean more like "You have no idea had good it feels to hear that." or something? Cus her reaction seemed to imply that.
Author's Response:
No, that's what I meant. It was intended to sound like a relieved statement from Peter. Lisa's reaction was just one of bashfulness, not like she'd said something insulting.
[Report This]Date: February 09 2015 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 24: Second Practice
That exact scenario happens all the time. Well beside the 5 inch freshman part. Story is getting really really good.
Next chapter is going to be good.
Author's Response:
Also possibly aside from the fact that she can pick him up in one hand. Thanks for reading!
Date: February 09 2015 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 24: Second Practice
a cute chap! love in air!!!!
Author's Response:
It is indeed in the air