Date: April 13 2015 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 29: Unwanted Hands
Maybe he was so enthusiastic about a new chapter that Iswear12 tore right through it!
;-)
Author's Response:
Apparently!
Date: April 12 2015 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 29: Unwanted Hands
I had no problems with the chapter, but it felt pretty short
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. Don't know what to tell ya about the length, though. It's 2000+ words.
[Report This]Date: April 11 2015 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 29: Unwanted Hands
Either Sharon somehow got to Lisa, before class (that is, intimidated/threatened her). Or, Lisa was misguidedly pre-occupied with a love note for Peter.
Author's Response:
I'd probably give people some sweetness-induced cavities if I used that second one.
Date: April 11 2015 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 29: Unwanted Hands
Well, that certainly was a nice demonstration of the coercive power of a silver monopoly. Looks like someone's had a quiet word with Lisa.
Author's Response:
Looks like that indeed...
[Report This]Date: April 11 2015 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 29: Unwanted Hands
I wonder what's wrong with Lisa? Has a family member of hers died or something? Also, I don't know why but I'm starting to like Sharon a bit. I think she has iffy intentions but I kinda feel like deep down, she's not so bad once you get to really know her... I don't know why I got that impression from her this chapter despite her little games, maybe I'm wrong though.
Author's Response:
Hehe. Anything's possible! Thanks for reviewing.