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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24 2015 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 31: Bowling Over

P.S.---Happy 200th reviewer response!

:-)

Author's Response:

Thanks!

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Date: May 24 2015 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 31: Bowling Over

Peter better be more watchful than that. Even duckpin bowling balls can achieve considerable enough mass, in rolling, to "accidentally" knock over a Thanksgiving kiddie-table!

Author's Response:

Very true. He just has to hope a bunch of hyper energetic teens aren't prone to reckless behavior...

Reviewer: luv2beshrunk Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24 2015 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 31: Bowling Over

Best story out there, glad to see you continuing it.  I would hate to think what might happen to Peter if he was to somehow become seperated from his sister as they were  leaving for the day (maybe he falls out through a hole in her jacket pocket or something when she stops to talk to her crush) and Peter finds himself having to take shelter until he can get his sisters attention but finds himself enveloped by the large shadow of Sharon :-)



Author's Response:

Thanks! There may eventually be a time where Peter finds himself without Erica there to protect him from people like Sharon.

Reviewer: Olo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24 2015 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 31: Bowling Over

Y'know, I'd be okay with Sharon or Amy or even Kimmy making off with Peter if any of them were cool enough to make a Big Lebowski reference at this point.



Author's Response:

Well, Lisa is definitely out of her element here...

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