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Reviewer: littlewarrior Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 30 2017 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 32: Popped Question

Well, of course Sharon has to make sure Peter "knows the score". But she'll need to stay creative if she wants to keep playing on his insecurities. And I have every confidence in her.

"the siren’s irises threatened to spin from her sclera as poisoned shuriken..."

Author's Response:

Sharon's got a very large playbook on hand

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 14 2015 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 32: Popped Question

Ah, I got it right ! I wish I can read the 5th part of story without incest. By the way, Talking abut the Freshman, I wonder what's Kimberly's role in the devil trio. Sharon is the chief, Amy henchwoman but I cant see Kim's role. Maybe she's rich.



Author's Response:

The incestuous parts of Blackmail aren't to everyone's liking, though by the 5th in the series, it's really just part of the story now.

Kimmy is there because she's easily coerced into following Sharon. She's the crony.

Reviewer: giantessfan9 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 13 2015 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 32: Popped Question

Awesome chapter. Can't wait for the next! (hopefully it's their date)

Author's Response:

Thanks! Their date won't be the next chapter, but it's not far off.

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 13 2015 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 32: Popped Question

I'm sure I am in the minority but hope things get a little rough for our vertically challenged freind. I think the biggest threat to Peter is not Sharon but the girl who dunked him into the water way back when this story started, she seemed genuinely dangerous, not quite right in the head. She's also probably the one who stuck him in the tuba. 



Author's Response:

There's still plenty more to come of this story, so odds are things will get rougher eventually. You're right to think Mandy is still a threat.

Reviewer: Orpheus Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 13 2015 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 32: Popped Question

Oh no. No no no no no, anything but that! Jack's suffered enough, hasn't he earned his redemption?!

 

Neat chapter though.



Author's Response:

I gave Jack a 3 year break, what more could he need?

Thanks!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 13 2015 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 32: Popped Question

:-D

Way to go, Peter!

YES-YES-YES-YES-YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

He can definitely use some cheerleaders right now

Reviewer: RandomStoriesHQ Signed [Report This]
Date: June 13 2015 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 32: Popped Question

Love this story so much! I can't wait for the next chapter!!! I really love Peter and Lisa's friendship- and Sharon's reaction when Peter 'popped the question'; what a tool :P
Keep up the great work as always and I'm pumped for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading/reviewing!

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 13 2015 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 32: Popped Question

Ok then so I guess it's A Little Blackmail 5 :p we're waiting for it a looong time!!!



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: Olo Signed [Report This]
Date: June 13 2015 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 32: Popped Question

It's unseemly (and poor plotting) to see malice in every mishap, but I can't help thinking Amy might have had something to do with that errant ball.

Nevertheless, I'll happily read any number of your fraught handheld scenes, however unseemly their origin (or conclusion...).



Author's Response:

It very well could've been Amy. Peter would prefer to think optimistically, but there's no way to know for sure. And there will be plenty more handheld scenes to come.

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