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Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17 2015 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 41: Desperation Reek

Things are not going well for me, Even stella won't keep Peter as prisoner for 1 whole week, she would keep him for the night! Ps: I find Suzanne very sloppy here for not supervise teenagers especially with here 5-inch loved son. About backlash I bet on Erica & her mom as Jessica too "weak"mentally & physically. 



Author's Response:

Yeah, it would be hard for Stella to get away with keeping him for a week. Suzanne may seem sloppy, but for years she's been letting her daughters' friends be around Peter and there haven't been major issues that necessitate her supervising them at all times.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2015 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 41: Desperation Reek

God bless you, Stella!



Author's Response:

I figured this would be your reaction.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16 2015 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 41: Desperation Reek

I kinda figured things would end up like this. Peter's mom is gonna go momma bear on this kid if she finds out what she's been doing to her son!



Author's Response:

Yeahhh it's not gonna be good.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2015 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 41: Desperation Reek

With Peter's luck, he'll pass out while he's in there. And Stella will make up some b.s. about his going to his dollhouse bathroom (or wherever) to wash off the preliminary foot-stink. Which Jessie will no doubt be willing enough to believe. So guess who winds up spending the one whole week until next dance class with Stella?

Of course, I could be wrong! But, at the risk of sounding immodest, that only happens once in a blue moon. And I've never heard of a blue moon two months in a row. ;-)

Author's Response:

Ha. Well, that's certainly an unpleasant fate. We'll see soon that Stella is much less subtle than you're guessing.

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16 2015 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 41: Desperation Reek

Stella's going to get a savage beating from Jessica. And then from Erica. And then from their mother.



Author's Response:

It definitely won't be pretty, whatever it is.

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