[Report This]Date: May 24 2016 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 49: Field Trip
I was just thinking about this story the other day. It is most definatly one of my favorites! Im so glad to see another chapter apear on this site. Keep up the amazing work!
Author's Response:
Thanks much. There will be some more of this story soon.
Date: May 23 2016 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 49: Field Trip
Oh oh! Suzanne about to go mother bear on those brats!
Author's Response:
Or at least Kimmy.
Date: May 23 2016 9:14 AM Title: Chapter 49: Field Trip
Yeah, having Suzanne on hand (heh) to observe Peter interacting with students (and teachers, Ms. Watson) brings new possibilities for intrigue, but Sharon's smart enough not to overplay her hand (heh heh) and provoke Suzanne to yank Peter out of school. Nor does Sharon need any help at all controlling Amy and Kimmy. If there's anyone whose care with Peter that Sharon would like to impugn in Suzanne's eyes, it's Lisa.
Either way, I'm very happy to imagine Sharon's chilly fingers enclosing Peter while he implores aid from her chiller gaze. Anything's better than being stuck at home, right Peter?
Author's Response:
Sharon's indeed pulling a couple of strings at all times. Peter's willing to put up with a lot to go to school, but there are times when he probably questions where he'd rather be.
[Report This]Date: May 23 2016 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 49: Field Trip
OOOOOOH! Now, there's a plot-twist I didn't see coming.
First off; welcome back. I was beginning to fear you might've gotten one of those writer's blocks that appear to be erosion-proof! Something I can empathize with, believe me.
Secondly; I'm pretty sure Kimmy was right. Amy _did_ step on her foot, deliberately! But, the question is, did she do so on her own...or at Sharon's non-verbal bidding? And, if the latter, I have to wonder if she did it to get on Suzanne's good side.
If so, that's a pretty risky move. Because, for one thing, it might result in Suzanne demanding that Kimmy be disowned by the other two-thirds of the trio (as in, permanently kicked out of it). Which, in turn, might give Peter and Lisa a potential ally of convenience when the eventual show-down comes around for these two factions.
Sorry if I'm over-thinking ahead. I tend to do that with good stories that I get emotionally involved in. And, at the risk of belaboring the obvious?
This is a VERY good story! :-)
Author's Response:
Thanks very much. I don't want to spoil, but I'll say that you're onto something with at least a couple of your considerations.