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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2016 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 50: Risk Management

Way to go, Peter! :-)

If only all mothers in _real life_ were willing to take "no" (or, in cases like this, "yes") as an unchangeable answer.

Author's Response:

Now that would be nice.

Reviewer: Olo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27 2016 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 50: Risk Management

Suzanne's reaction is less surprising than the logical conclusion of the long-term parenting that any parent of a "special needs" child would have to engage in.  What is more surprising is that both Suzanne and Erica have independently realized that Peter's safety is best served by bolstering his inner resources.  They see that hyper-awareness of how dangerous the world can be—something they previously thought was a necessary survival trait—is forcing Peter into a permanent flinch.  They recognize that there is an absolute limit to their ability to safeguard Peter physically, and that Peter needs to feel safe.  Whether it is developing his own physical resources (as Erica proposed) or simply taking ownership of the decision to attend school (as Suzanne admitted), a bit of bravado will be necessary for Peter to find his own path.

Unfortunately, I hope suspect Sharon is clever enough to make the same realization and exploit it.



Author's Response:

Yes, Erica and Suzanne are actually becoming a little more of the same mind on Peter's safety as this story progresses, though Suzanne is definitely the much more precarious of the two. And with every encounter, Sharon is gathering a little more information about how Peter and his power dynamics tick.

Reviewer: geeman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2016 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 50: Risk Management

Not as overprotective crazy as I expected from Suzanne. She was actually fairly reasonable, all things considered. I guess the reality of her little boy growing up finally got through to her.



Author's Response:

She's slowly but surely coming to grips with the reality of her kid growing up.

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