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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 03 2017 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 66: Mama Bear

Mandy might be suspended. But, somehow, I don't think "the greatest threat under this roof" is gone.

Author's Response:

;)

Reviewer: geeman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 03 2017 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 66: Mama Bear

I dont see how Mandy wouldnt be kicked out, she almost killed the guy! As long as shes around Peter will never be safe! In fact I think her punishment should be WORSE, as in, send her to juvy or something!



Author's Response:

You're probably not alone in feeling that way. Ultimately Peter just has to cross his fingers

Reviewer: GuyGoneSmall Signed [Report This]
Date: April 03 2017 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 66: Mama Bear

Good story so far.  Maybe an unaware scene for a little bit would be nice.   something to spice up the story a little bit more.  like an unaware teacher or something.  



Author's Response:

There will probably be an unaware scene later on

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