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Reviewer: SHREK Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 18 2017 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 69: Toe Lie

God I love Ms. Watson. She's just so...hot.

Although, if she did anything along the lines of what she does in here (blackmail and extortion) in real life, it would be far less hot.

Author's Response:

Thanks. We just might spend some more time with her later in the story

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2017 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 69: Toe Lie

At first, I thought you had made a typo! But, a little re-reading proved that Peter Clark is Our Hero's full name. So, that being said, I give you top marks for showing the little guy that he still has other sources of potential trouble besides Sharon and Company. Basically extorting him into giving her another foot massage makes Coach Watson even worse than Toilet Girl, as subtle intimidation can, in a sense, be even scarier than outright attempted murder!*


*Although, I'm sure Pete might disagree with that latter point.

Author's Response:

I wondered if someone might think that at first glance. Watson just occasionally calls Peter by his last name, as many coaches might. He's definitely aware on this day especially just how many sources of trouble he has on all sides.

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