Reviewer: giantessfan9 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 06 2017 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 75: Escape Plan

Another great chapter.

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Olo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 04 2017 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 75: Escape Plan

So Mandy's clever enough to set up tests to see if Peter is trustworthy, but she's surprised when Peter turns out to be as fragile as Sparky. What a messed-up kid.

The wrenching thing here is that Peter's best option is probably to play up his helplessness, perhaps even exaggerate his injuries.  I just hope his internal-Erica monologue won't prevent him from seizing the only way to manipulate Mandy.  Even if it works, he'll feel like a deceiver.  (Bonus self-doubt: he'll worry that no matter what he achieves later, he'll always be tempted to fall back into "wounded bird" mode.)

Author's Response:

Mandy's all about unwinnable scenarios that she may not even acknowledge as unwinnable herself.