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Reviewer: foreignkanto Signed [Report This]
Date: September 27 2017 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 76: False Hope

People say it sounds too good to be true. It's not good! There's no way he survive a night alone in the forest, let alone find his way back home. He's going to have to give into defeat and go back with her, willingly.

 

And when she said she couldn't use him as a friend, but as the next best thing, I thought it was going to be something kinky, like sex toy.

 

Great chapter though.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 27 2017 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 76: False Hope

Heh! This sounds too good to be true.

Author's Response:

Most things are

Reviewer: Olo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 26 2017 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 76: False Hope

He's gonna hafta apologize and ask to see the movie with her.  And he has to mean it.



Author's Response:

At this point, good acting may or may not even make a difference

Reviewer: Nodqfan Signed [Report This]
Date: September 26 2017 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 76: False Hope

You know I actually feel bad for Mandy these last few chapters. I think all she wanted was a true friend and really considered Peter that friend. I hope that they can reconcile in the future.



Author's Response:

While Mandy's definitely one of the antagonists, I do hope some readers will be able to acknowledge, as Peter has to some degree, that she's somewhat of a tragic result rather than outright villain

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