Date: October 20 2018 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 77: Strip Tease
Almost hate to say it. But, here it is, five months later. And my "presumption" is looking increasingly not-so-erroneous.
Author's Response:
I'm not really sure what you're trying to achieve with comments like this, but you do you.
[Report This]Date: January 24 2018 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 77: Strip Tease
Now, things are getting _too_ dark.
:-(
Author's Response: I understand and expected there would be readers who didn’t like this section as much. The tone of these few chapters is not representative of the rest of the story, though.
Date: January 24 2018 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 77: Strip Tease
I'm glad to see an update to this story. Peter is in pretty big trouble still, as expected. Though personally I think he has a better chance of survival with Mandy than out in the wilderness, where he wouldn't know the way home, would take like a month to get there even if he did, and would probably be eaten by animal within hours anyway.
I wonder what Mandy's play with the camera is. If she plans on keeping him forever, she can't share those pictures with anyone. Though, I wouldn't be surprised if when he does finally get rescued, Sharon somehow gets ahold of the pictures.
Author's Response: You’re right about his survival odds, and this is something Peter is steadily realizing as well. Also a good thought about the camera, and it just may be addressed at some point.
Date: January 24 2018 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 77: Strip Tease
I'm less confident than before about my ability to predict where this is going, but the humiliation in this chapter is so exquisite (and potentially public) that I cannot help but suspect that Mandy got some coaching.
Sharon share alike....
(Love this chapter. That photo is going to haunt Peter for decades, no matter how this turns out.)
Author's Response: Glad to hear I can still surprise with this one. It does seem like Mandy’s had some advice at some point.