Date: September 28 2011 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Great so far. So when is it gonna get interesting
Author's Response:
well, i'd like to think some people think it's already interesting; this is going to be a much slower paced story than my normal ones, but it will eventually get more intense
[Report This]Date: September 25 2011 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Wow, this is great so far. It's obviously a common scenario but I've never seen anyone cover it in such a realistic way. I like the pace you're taking with the story too, no need to rush anything - you describe the psychology and the interaction wonderfully.
Author's Response: thanks for the review! my goal with this one is to take my time heading in a general direction and just see what happens
Date: September 25 2011 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Are you going to just show us his life going through school shrunk or are we going to get into jealousy with the popular chicks or something?? Im a big fan of all your previous work, and i have hope that this story will have as much humiliation and demoralization as the last ones :)
Author's Response:
all in good time, this will probably end up being a longer story, so there will be plenty of room for that stuff later
[Report This]Date: September 15 2011 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
I really like the story so far. I especially like the emphasis on Peter's desire to be accepted considering it's his first time in school due to how he's different, to the point of wanting to make friends with Amy, Kimmy, and Sharon despite how he has a bad vibe about them, particularly Sharon.
Author's Response:
thanks for the review! as i'm sure you can guess, peter's desperation for acceptance isn't going to serve him too well later on
Date: September 15 2011 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
I think this story has officially become my favorite on this site! The detail and characters are so well defined and I find myself really getting attached to these characters. If this goes well will there be sequels? ie The Sophomore, The Junior, and The Senior? Keep up the great work man! I check back on this site several times a day to see if there's a new chapter. BTW, I totally imagined the three girls as the Plastics from Mean Girls!
Author's Response:
haha i can't think that far ahead. if there's interest when this story is done, i'd certainly consider a sequel.
and i see what you mean with the girls; you've got the mastermind ringleader, the pushy assertive one, and the one who just gets dragged along :)
[Report This]Date: September 14 2011 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Nice story. It actually caught my interest and kept me reading. You've got a great perception for detail and describing intangible things.
Author's Response:
thanks! that's one of the fun things for me; it's like a puzzle to word things that don't really have a wording, if you know what i mean
[Report This]Date: September 14 2011 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
I like the development of the story and the characters a lot so far, and I think the school setting offers a lot of potential. I'll keep reading.
Good job.
Author's Response:
thanks for the review, littlemac
[Report This]Date: September 10 2011 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Wow. I generally don't like SM, but this is one of the best stories I've read on here in a long time. More please! And faster!
Author's Response:
thanks for the review! i'm doing my best to write these quickly, but juggling 2 ongoing stories at once, it gets a little trickier.
[Report This]Date: September 02 2011 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
like this story already. cant wait to read more.
aaron
Author's Response:
thanks, i hope you like the coming installments
[Report This]Date: September 01 2011 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Not too bad. Is this a revamp of "The Shrunken Student" stories from Writing.com?
Author's Response:
well, probably not since i've never heard of those ;) i am aware, though, that schools are popular locations for giantess stories, so this is going to be my spin on the subgenre
Date: September 01 2011 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
I noticed the gentle/kind tag mixed in with some polar opposites so I'm guessing Peter will eventually find love but at the same time be bullied at school. So it's safe to assume there will be people who take advantage of him and others who, like his own mother, think he is someone special. I've read a couple of other stories about school and the quickly dive into the sexual part the relationship and this leaves little precious character development. I think it would be best if the two characters grow to like each other rather having everything happen all at once. Your story does look like it could turn into something I'd much enjoy reading, just depends if you get the right balance of evil and nice in it. Surely there will be some characters we meet who will protect Peter, other than his family. And while I don't normally like giant men, I think to leave men out of this story would be unrealistic given he can't go to an all girls school. Obviously I hope there won't be too much on giant men, but maybe there could be a love rival? Then again, this could be two ladies fueding over Peter rather than male jealously.
Author's Response:
i too have read "school stories" around here that go sexual absurdly quickly, so be assured, i won't be venturing to nearly that level or speed with this tale. peter will indeed make other allies other than his mother to cope with school, though.
on the giant men bit, i do agree, and i feel confident that what i have planned will keep it realistic; this is giantessworld, after all