Date: March 09 2017 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Back at it! Thanks, and its always great when you focus on this one.
Author's Response:
Thanks much. My focus isn't completely back to this one, but there will be more new chapters soon
[Report This]Date: January 01 2017 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Haven't read the chapter yet, just guessing that Between Tulips actually means Between Two Lips.
Author's Response:
;)
Date: December 28 2016 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
oh man, I knew something would go bad in this chapter, that her parents wouldn't be too excited. But that was harsh. Wondering where it goes from here. I also meant to review last chapter to say I loved it, especially in those paragraphs where he doesn't know what his sister is doing. I love how she's trying to train him.
Author's Response:
This chapter is definitely not meant to feel like the hopeful little adventures that so many of this story's segments are. I appreciate you reading/reviewing.
[Report This]Date: December 28 2016 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
I wonder where Sharon is through all this... Probably not important currently, though I believe she will come into play later.
I still think Lisa is the mystery person who put Peter in an instrument, etc., by the way.
Author's Response:
We're still a few chapters away from another face-to-face Sharon interaction. You're right that she doesn't feel vital to the story right now, but readers will increasingly feel her presence even if she's not there.
Date: December 24 2016 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Great chap! and yes It's time to man up otherwise you'll end like Mandy's drawing Peter.
Author's Response:
He's going to have to figure that out quickly.
Date: December 23 2016 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Great update! Us readers would really like to see you write your self ragged on a marathon binge ( your stuff has gotten that good), but we'll take what we can get! Hope you have a chance to continue the time out series, maybe TO7 pulls the different Arton/Mack/Stevens strings together like the shrink act files start to do?
The OmegaVerse is too good to let go too though, a really good prequel is needed that expands on the original pre-omega situation.
Don't run yourself ragged for us though... :)
Author's Response:
Thanks very much. I don't really have time to do the writing binges like I did when I first started on the site but I write whenever I can. TO7 is being worked on. The Omegaverse is sort of on break now but it has not been let go - Ackbar would be the one to ask about that though.
Date: December 14 2016 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Gee, you really are taking your time for peter to open up about the loose ends at school
Author's Response:
I've been writing this story for five years and Peter's only three weeks into school. A slow burn is probably called for.
Date: December 11 2016 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Gotta say that for those of us looking for caring interaction adventure stories that are ideologically engaging, you're really on the way to a gold standard
Author's Response:
I appreciate the compliment and your continued commentary
Date: December 08 2016 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Really appreciate the update, wonder what the dirty scheme is, and how complicated the execution will be, wonder if Sharon has yet to form a plan or if you will clue us in on what's already in the works.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. Sharon's playing the long game; without wanting to spoil, I will say she already has something in mind that we'll begin to see the early pieces for in the coming chapters.
Date: December 08 2016 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Even being at school since several week, Peter's still lacking assurance in himself to talk back fimly to Sharon & co.
Author's Response:
Assurance is hard to come by at his size
Date: December 03 2016 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
good funny chapter! idea trivial pursuit game is brillance.
PS: any hint for TO 7?
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! I unfortunately don't have any new information about TO7. I have written part of it but am not sure when I will be posting it.
Date: December 02 2016 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
This really is an unbelievable story, the best of yours. Please keep at it
Author's Response:
Thanks! I intend to.
Date: November 29 2016 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
This story is so terrific, I really hope you get time to write more on it
Author's Response:
Thanks. I'll add more soon.
Date: November 17 2016 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Finally you're back ! Good Chap! I guess Jessica is still a bit traumazied due Stella part. I hope I gonna see Scott meeting his dad in timeout 7.
Author's Response:
Yeah Jessica hasn't forgotten easily. Scott will indeed meet his dad in TO7.
[Report This]Date: November 15 2016 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
54 chapters binge-read. 3 hours spent on it. 0 regrets.
I could give quite a few compliments, but I'll just stick to my biggest love: Sharon. I'm not sure whether or not I should hate her or offer her virgin sacrifices, and I feel like that's a good thing :) All that without her getting much actual "action" too.....it's impressive, the way you flesh out characters. Excellent work here, this is one I'll be following until the end.
Author's Response:
I hope they were hours well spent. I appreciate you taking the time to read through. Glad you like Sharon. She'll play a more direct part in the story later on.
Date: November 15 2016 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Back at it; Awesome!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: October 10 2016 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
This is one of your best stories yet, keep up the great work
Author's Response:
Thanks. I intend to someday
Date: May 28 2016 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Happy to see Suzanne opened her eyes on her son reality. Now it'd be better if Peter tell her about Sharon's truth. But it won't happen , right? lol
Author's Response:
Peter has too much to lose if Suzanne becomes nervous about Sharon too.
Date: May 24 2016 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
I agree with Carycomic, Amy stepped on Kimmy's foot. Now let's see what will happen with paranoid Suzanne.
Author's Response:
She won't react very positively, for sure.
Date: May 23 2016 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
About time, I've been waiting.
Author's Response:
Sounds like a lot of people have.