Date: March 22 2016 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Please continue this series, it was one of my favorite ones on this site!
Author's Response:
I will at some point. This story is my longest running and tends to get updated in bursts followed by a hiatus.
Date: February 19 2016 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Please continue
Author's Response:
I plan to eventually. Life's been too busy lately.
[Report This]Date: November 29 2015 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
I don't know... maybe it's her name, or maybe it's her all too cheery attitude, or maybe it's that she's taking space from Lisa, Sharon, Mandy, Erica and Calvin, whom I like all of, but for some reason I'm not quite sure of, I don't like Bluebell.
Author's Response:
I guess we can't be sure for now. For Peter's sake, though, it would be lucky if your hunch is incorrect.
[Report This]Date: November 20 2015 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Ok, so, rounding up the usual suspects.
Erica not only has no motive, but also doesn't have the same gym period has Peter, so thus couldn't have access to gym clothes.
The Sharon Trio all have the gym period, but none of them have a wind instrument like the one Peter was trapped in earlier. Likewise Mandy.
The only ones who we know are in band are Lena, who also has a different gym period, and...
Lisa. Who also happens to have a wind instrument (clarinet) and has his gym class.
Author's Response:
Hehe. Good approach to try lining up possibilities by trait/accessibility. Can't comment on what's right or not, of course. ;)
Date: November 14 2015 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Again, I'm glad Peter's getting some good advice, but I hope Lisa is too.
Author's Response:
She could use it just as much as Peter, really.
Date: November 14 2015 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
cute chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: November 12 2015 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Loving the story, really hoping for some Mandy alone time. Keep up the great writing!
Author's Response:
Thanks. There's enough story left that such a thing is very possible.
Date: November 09 2015 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
While Peter should be quite used to staring up at giant faces—the closest thing to an equal-sized face he's ever seen has been on a postage stamp—asserting his autonomy in the face (heh) of reckless indifference to or outright disdain for his welfare is still a skill in development. Good progress today.
Cary, I think the abduction hasn't been avoided so much as deferred. Sharon's been off-screen for so long that a master plan for simultaneously distracting all of Peter's (established) guardians is likely in the works.
Author's Response:
Slowly but surely he's making steps forward. And you're definitely right that Sharon hasn't simply cut herself out of Peter's life for good.
[Report This]Date: November 01 2015 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Cute chapter! Peter had a lot of good fortune by going on that little date with Lisa, and then Peter had bad fortune with that whole Stella fiasco, and then good fortune again by having this little intimite moment with Lisa, following that trend, can we expect Peter to have some bad fortune next? Anyways, I'm looking forward to the next one!
Author's Response:
Hehe. Sensing a pattern there? Can't spoil, but trouble is never too far away for someone like Peter.
[Report This]Date: November 01 2015 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
HALLELUJAH!
You did it, Jacky boy! This chapter I could tell had more detail on every single thing. This chapter was just one interaction that focused on everything it can! Thank you, Jack.
Thank you.
Author's Response:
Uh yep I sure did.
Date: November 01 2015 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
And, in answer to your unspoken question, yes. I am putting Stella in the same league as Sharon, Kimmy, Amy, and Mandy.
Author's Response:
It actually took me a second to figure out who you meant by the fifth. Peter's probably lucky that the only the trio are aware of each other's existence as potential allies.
[Report This]Date: October 26 2015 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Excellent story. Very creative and well-written. Was also glad to see an update! Please keep it up!!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: October 26 2015 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Well, yet another chapter that I can't get into, but hopefully now we can get back to Lisa and Sharon and Mandy and all the stuff that makes this story good. And another date with Lisa? GREAT!
Jack, here's the thing: Lisa and Peter's relationship is the best thing about this story you've made here. These two are just charming and likable and I love reading about them, and Jessica just isn't as much of a likable character.
Author's Response:
Again, don't know what to tell ya; Lisa and Peter's relationship is a part of the story, but there are a lot of other narratives to service. This may not be a story for you.
Date: September 24 2015 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Fully agree with Maximus!
Author's Response:
Ha. There will be more!
Date: September 23 2015 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Some of us love Stella, well, Adam X and myself anyway. Hope to see more of her.
Cary and Jimbob, this story has been a gentle giantess fans dream, Peter has barely endured anything! Let Jacksmith throw Adam and I a little action our way once in a while ;)
It's definitely mainly a gentle story, but rest assured Peter will find himself in more sticky situations before it's over.
Author's Response:
[Report This]Date: September 21 2015 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Yeah, I know, but I just think that so many other characters are more interesting, like Erica, Mandy, Sharon's Goons, Alita, Leah, Tritter, the unknown girl who (SPOILERS) kidnapped Peter in the clarinet, the mom, the play woman, the guy Peter met at the play, and like I said earlier, Sharon and Lisa.
Author's Response:
It just comes down to personal preference, I guess. I'm trying to give Peter a wide variety of personalities to contend with here. All those characters you mention will ultimately have much more real estate in the story than Stella.
Date: September 20 2015 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
I really loved the past couple chapters! Awesome work!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: September 20 2015 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Another aspect of what could happen to a teenager in a world of giants. This friendship is over. This is a good lesson for Peter to avoid young children, because they don't think about consequences.
Author's Response:
Yep, the friendship is definitely over. Peter already knows to be cautious around people younger than him, but he's never had a problem like this before in his own home, so it wasn't expected.
[Report This]Date: August 25 2015 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Yes! Mandy! Been waiting for her. Don't know what shes going to do though, Lisa is like the Terminator the way shes protecting Peter. Looking forward to seeing what you have planned!
Author's Response:
Mandy won't be doing anything to Peter as long as Lisa is around, but that doesn't mean she can't still stir up some trouble.
Date: August 25 2015 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Keep up the great work! Excellent story
Author's Response:
Thank you!