[Report This]Date: August 16 2015 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
I read each chapter hoping that Peter and Erica will have an erotic moment together, but I understand that's not the type of story you're writing.. still, great work
Author's Response:
Yeah this really isn't that type of story. Though there will be some action later on in the story with characters Peter isn't related to.
Date: August 13 2015 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Damn it Erica you did turn down a free milkshake a huge for me lol
Author's Response:
It was probably a tough decision.
Date: August 09 2015 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
I like how Peter might be making a male friend, and I see a lot of potential with this but man iI'm glad to see an update, its been a while!
Author's Response:
Thanks! We'll see Peter get to know this kid a little better in future chapters.
[Report This]Date: June 28 2015 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Good detailed story about how life can be as a five inch person in high school. I always love your detailed worlds and that for every action there is a consequence. In most of your stories the characters feel like real people. That what makes them good.
Erica is a strong character. Peter is lucky to have her as a big sister. She's smart and sees al possible dangers from a mile away and try to prevent them as much as possible. She is the best friend/caretaker he has.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing. This one especially I try to show direct consequences for every small interaction. Glad you like Erica; he is indeed lucky to have her.
Date: June 14 2015 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Excellent chapter they are all good but any chapter with a Sharon handheld is excellent!!! What if Lisa somehow convinces Peter's mom to allow her to take him to the movies and she unfortuanately lets Sharon and her trio know as if to rub it in and while at the movies, Peter becomes seperated from Lisa and to make things worse Sharon and her cronies showed up to see what a date with a 5 inch boy is like...... :-)
Author's Response:
Thanks. Honestly Lisa isn't the kind of person to tempt fate by rubbing it in, but there still may well be issues that arise on the date anyway.
Date: June 13 2015 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Finally Peter ask out Lisa ! but watch for the devil trio! Wonder what will be her mom's reaction about her son's first's date!lol Panic or joy maybe both.
PS: my guess is for next story will be time out 7 :p
Author's Response:
You're right to think there may be troubles from both the trio and Peter's mom.
And good guess, but not quite. When I say a very long time, I mean very VERY long time.
Date: April 13 2015 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Somebody's been watching south park
Author's Response:
I actually hadn't seen South Park until after I was about halfway through this story, and by then I already had a grumpy uncaring teacher named Mr. Garrison written in...
Date: April 12 2015 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
@chocolatecheese1... Yes chocolatecheese, God forbid a giantess story to have an actual plot to it or......oh my god.....character development!
Man if reading this story sucks for you. I guess reading a complicated and well meshed NOVEL like The Titan Empire books must absolutly kill you..
Unlike you I come to this website for it's entertainment value. Everything else comes second....but if u hate this story soooo much then stop reading it, and search for something that will gets ur blood pumping to the places you want it to pump to.
I understand that this is not what you want. But there are two types of people on this site, the kind that want quote "the good parts" right away, and the kind that actually want a plot. A story's content is entirely decided on which type an author is. If he deems something is neccessary than he will write it and post it here. Whatever he writes is necessary for the world he wants to create.
So don't call his work unnecessary.
Have a good life and hope you find a story more fitting to your taste.
Author's Response:
I appreciate the defense of plot-focused stories. I guess he left to go find one more like what he's looking for.
Date: April 11 2015 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
@ChocolateCheese1, you don't like it, there are an exceptional amount of stories on this site that cater to your desired action.
Author's Response:
I'm pretty sure he showed up to the wrong party here.
[Report This]Date: April 11 2015 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Nice chapter as usual :) I'm really worried about Lisa now! Has Sharon and her evil friends said something to her about Peter? Or is is something else entirely? You've filled my head with questions! (Hope you can answer them soon ;) )
Author's Response:
Thanks! I will certainly try to answer them soon. Probably within the next couple weeks.
[Report This]Date: April 11 2015 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Really well written as always Jack!
Especially hoping for a continuation of "Persuasive Sparring" With Ms.Watson. That was leading somewhere for sure ;)
*Repost* forgot to rate
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! I assume you meant Tightly Wound, not Persuasive Sparring? You're right that we haven't heard the last of Ms. Watson's ramblings on that subject.
Date: April 11 2015 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
ps: I miswroted my last post. I meant to wrote i'm sure that Sharon has something to do with LISA's strange attitude.
Author's Response:
I gotcha.
Date: April 11 2015 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
sure that Sharon has something to do with strange attitude! Beside I have a more general question, by browsing your favourite stories, I saw your preference about stories with siblings (sister-brother ). Is there a specific reason?
Author's Response:
There's a couple reasons. The characters being related just adds another uncomfortable twist to an already interesting power struggle - they tend to know more about each other than just strangers, and would be more likely to take advantage of it than a lover. It's also a harder relationship to write in this genre, so when people do it well I tend to favorite it.
Date: February 22 2015 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Hello!
It´s me again.
Soy consiente de que en mi último comentario argumente que soy de los que lee la historia una vez que esta ha finalizado. Pero también recuerdo haber escrito que leo todos los comentarios que dejas al pie de cada capítulo. Así que cuando lo leí termine posando los ojos en los ultimos 4 parrafos. Los leí, casi de forma instintiva e involuntaria, y que Peter tenga una conversación con su sobreproctetora madre, y basandome en el capíulo de Sra. Watson, solo me ha hecho preguntarme algo ¿Deberia entusiasmarme más de lo que hago con cada actualización? ¿Sera Peter evoque las incinuaciones de la Sra. Watson?
Si mi comentario te ofendio de algun modo, de antemano te ofresco una disculpa.
Sin nada más que agregar, me despido.
Bye :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for commenting again. I don't want to reveal the story's future content yet, but I can say Watson wants something from Peter, and may soon find a way to ensure she gets it.
Date: February 22 2015 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
I forgot to mention in my last comment- will Peter ever make friends with another boy? It seems a little strange that he's only been approached by girls, even though the school is obviously co-ed. I know this is on a site specifically for F/m but still... Also, does Peter have a father present, or are they divorced?
Author's Response:
There will be at least one male character appearing in a future chapter for Peter to contend with. He has a greater ease making friends with girls, as he's just been more exposed to them in his life because of his sisters and their friends, but it is something I plan to bring up. Peter's father is not present, and that too will be addressed at a later point.
[Report This]Date: February 21 2015 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
This chapter was awesome! I have to say- I like how Erica calls Peter 'twerp' all the time; it really adds to the reality of their G/T brother and sister relationship :) as usual, the dialogue was amazing, and it was nice to hear Peter opening up a little about his high school experience. God knows he couldn't keep it all bottled up! But anyhow, this was awesome, and I can't wait for the next chapter ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad you like the dialogue, and the relationship between the two siblings.
Date: February 19 2015 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
you're right! Ray has brown hair and blue eyes after all but it's rare. Let's hope of Cayce's return and he make the sequel then !
If you ready to ask 1 last question on that story, did Cayce mention why Ray stopped his education when he started living at Dalton's?
Author's Response:
Sorry, it's been too long since I read it, so I don't remember a lot of the details like that.
Date: February 19 2015 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
Sorry I misuunderstood. well, I'm sure Cayce will not be mad at you if you write it. He said he'd plan making a sequel bu he never did it. You may ask him if you're interesting but he seems to have left gtsworld as his last review dated in 2010. Looking forward for your new stories.
PS: i doubt nicole is blonde bcz she has brown eyes, remember. I view as brunette. For the judge, I was talking about the one for the hearing for Ray's custody.
Author's Response:
Still, it wouldn't be right, since it's his original content. Plus I have plenty of my own things I'm going to be posting soon.
That's fair, though a person can still have brown eyes and blonde hair, it's just uncommon. It's however you want to picture her.
Date: February 18 2015 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
you can write a sequel whenever you want to avoid the burning-out. I just suggested that bcz you're a talented writer and there're ideas for sequel (Noami's revenge per example). Homunculus has similairies to The Freshman n TO series too. well you better know your limits though!
PS: as non english and somewhat lazy reader, I need to help to understand two points on homunculus. Did Cayce mention Nicole's hair color (brunette or blonde like her mom)? And Was the judge really brided?
Author's Response:
I actually just meant that because the story belongs to another writer, I wouldn't be right for me to do a sequel to it.
It has been a while since I read it. I don't think Cayce mentions Nicole's hair (I always imagined it blonde like Naomi's). It's been too long for me to remember the answer to the 2nd thing.
Date: February 18 2015 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 1: Separation Anxiety
I wonder if you know homunculus by Cayce (3rd most read). This contains your favourite subgenre (feet).The storyline is interesting. Maybe you can go for a sequel of that story!?
Author's Response:
I have indeed read it and love it like most probably do. I'm fairly certain I'd be burned at the stake for trying to write a sequel to it, though.