Date: November 13 2018 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 2: Sibling Bonding
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[Report This]Date: December 13 2012 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 2: Sibling Bonding
Hey Jack,
This is really good, I like the slow build-up, and the dependance that he has on his Giantess sister! This has the flavor of the old original movie,"The Incredable Shrinking Man", (Only he is already only 5" inches tall) If you've recalled the differance between the book, and the movie? The Babysitter comes and the shrinking man has to hide from her and he spys on her,......REMEMBER? (in the book, By: Mathason)
It just kind of made me remember that, I don't know why, though?
Excellent work!
*wildcatman*
Author's Response:
thanks much for the review. i haven't seen the film or read the book, so i'm afraid i can't comment on either, but from what you describe, that is the sort of understated vibe I'm going for
Date: September 07 2011 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 2: Sibling Bonding
Great story so far. I love these kinds of scenarios with a naturally tiny person. They're a refreshing change from shrinking stories, since you can skip his transformation and reaction and just focus on his interaction with the world.
Nice relationship with the sister. Slightly antagonistic but there's a hint of another side of her.
Author's Response:
glad you like it Pixis, good to hear from you again
[Report This]Date: September 07 2011 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 2: Sibling Bonding
This looks amazing so far. I love the relationship between brother and sister. Hopefully he won't do anything stupid, but I rather doubt it! Good work!
Author's Response:
thanks for reading bud, always like hearing from fellow authors whose work i enjoy
Date: September 07 2011 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 2: Sibling Bonding
You're right I suppose. Your writing is generally flawless and I now that I think about it, I'm wasting my time by pointing out trivial details. Besides, if I'm too picky I can only assume you'll return the favour, and as I hope to have a new story up by the end of the week my mishap will be fresh in your memory.
Author's Response:
yes, MWAHAHA, I shall have VENGEANCE! ;) hehe i hope not, and thank you very much for the compliment
[Report This]Date: September 05 2011 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 2: Sibling Bonding
awesome update. loved the fact that 'big' sis has his back. cant wait to see what the next part will be about..
an lena seems nice.
aaron
Author's Response: thanks for the review! as we'll see soon, the guy's going to need all the back-up he can get
[Report This]Date: September 05 2011 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 2: Sibling Bonding
Developing nicely, although one minor issue is that niether Peter nor the read know who Lena is at this stage so for the momonet wouldn't she just be another girl until a proper intruduction (unless I haven't been paying enough attention she was mentioned in the previous chapter). Besides I don't think that mentioning her name is even important at this stage, although if she is important she can tell him she was the girl from the bus or something.
Author's Response:
i realize it's only in a passing remark, but i do mention in chapter 2 that Lena is Erica's friend, so we can probably assume Peter has met her several times before; hope this clears it up
[Report This]Date: September 05 2011 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 2: Sibling Bonding
"The name is Bond; Sibling Bond."
Ba-DUM-boom!
Seriously, though; thanks for posting the second chapter, so soon. It continues to whet my literary appetite.*
*Always wanted to use that term!
Author's Response:
i'm almost ashamed to say it, but you definitely got me to crack a smile with the pun. and i'm glad you're enjoying the story.