Date: September 28 2011 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 7: Artistic Expression
I love your descriptions. The simple act of Mandy picking him up in her hand was more vividly described than in many stories. It really helps the reader get into Peter's mind.
(And yes, I think this is already interesting.)
Author's Response:
thanks, i appreciate the affirmation. i realize that this story is much slower than most of mine, and i'm hoping it can be as enjoyable
[Report This]Date: September 28 2011 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 7: Artistic Expression
I think Peter is the first guy in history to have a girl give him the "brush-on."
;-)
Author's Response:
my mind is boggled to imagine where you continuously get these puns
Date: September 28 2011 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 7: Artistic Expression
Hmm, I always wondered how Peter would write and do his homework at that size. Even if he's on the computer, using a normal size keyboard must be a pain. And if he's writing than his handwriting would be so small and a pain to read. But also books would be awkward to read unless he has someone ot read them for him. Sorry, I probably shouldn't have mentioned those things as I may have burst your bubble. I can only hope you have a solution for everything.
Author's Response:
Well he doesn't actually use the computer, he gives his tiny homework assignments to his mother, who blows them up on the scanner, and then she sends them. and yes, his writing probably is a pain to read, but if he writes larger even relative to the page it probably helps. and he doesn't have tiny copies of the books, but if his mother just pulls them up on the computer or, say, an ebook (current culture reference, ha!) at home then he can look through them that way. so, my bubble is currently still intact. you do always like to keep me on my toes, don't you?