Reviews For Sweet Revenge
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Reviewer: The Demon Signed [Report This]
Date: October 04 2014 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

i love that song,cupcakes.

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 05 2013 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'll climb up to this standard. I will do it. Just give me advice, please help me write like this.



Author's Response: How can I help you?

Reviewer: KageTengu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 03 2012 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow i've been away for a bit. But your still as horrifiying as ever. The way she killed her freind the methodical torture. I mean wow. I think i may be falling in love with you. Keep it up!

Reviewer: supernatural Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 13 2012 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

Um, ITs weird but i usaully dont like this kind of story but i actually liked this.

Reviewer: F_G_F Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 21 2011 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

I like the way the story is progressing.  It seems you are building up to something and I am looking forward to seeing what it is.  You have a way of really capturing what people would actually say in a given situation.  The conversations are really natural and flow much the way a real conversation would.  That's harder to do than it sounds, the results are often robotic and mechanical.  You don't have this problem, and it makes your stories easy to read.

As for the paragraph indent, try typing in word and then cutting and pasting into the text window.  That's what I do and it seems to work well.  PS: I use a Mac, and it's anyone's guess if it'll work the same on a PC.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 14 2011 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 1

hmmm. im interested to see where you take this. hope you continue it, itswritten very well.

aaron

Reviewer: BigAl Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2011 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 1

Good start! Looking forward to seeing what happens next!

Reviewer: F_G_F Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 11 2011 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

I am excited to see you put another story up and I promise I will follow it closely and read every word.  I can't wait to see what Anna has in store for these two!

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