Reviewer: Devoool Signed [Report This]
Date: October 15 2011 5:46 AM Title: The curse affects the rest of the strawhats

good chapter, its good to put some realistic events here and there, lol, its better to slow down a little bit. this chapter could be the introduction of strewhat crew being shrunk

I don't like it voyuer, so I would suggest that Nami and Robin discovers them in the next chapter.

its just my opinion if you have planned on what to write next, i recommend you to stick with it XD then take seggustions XDD i don't want you to get confused

kaya would be a realy awesome gentle and playful gaintess, XD ussop is a lucky bastrd -_-"

 

right now, all what I can say, is GOOD JOB!! im not exprete in writing but i really love your story, PLEASE KEEP ON GOING !!! XDD