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Reviewer: Devoool Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 17 2011 5:31 PM Title: Fun with Nami and Vivi

I didn't want chopper to join the fun, too. but it was clever idea to take him out and make him end the story XD.

LOL four perspectives!! that must be tough doing it XD I can't imagine all the dirty things they'll do to them in the next chapter *nose bleed + pervert smile*

i think you might be tired, from your last chapter it didn't looked like you put to much thinking in it, so take a rest you don't need to post a chapter every day, you've done a really good job so far ^^



Author's Response: Yeah I wasn't happy with that one too. Like I said, I hav. Writers block so I do need to take a break. I'll try to make a good comeback with the next chapter

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