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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: February 14 2013 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 6

So Marcia can die of drowning but not from the lack of air that comes with being more than a mile high. That's really odd. Unless I'm missing something?



Author's Response:

The "mesosphere" begins at 30 miles, and I read that the oxygen/nitrogen levels are rougly the same as in the lower atmosphere. But Krawalonians, being able to reach such heights, need less oxygen than humans. But they can drown indeed.

Reviewer: Aborigen Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 16 2011 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 6

Some of the details you include are very useful, like the village stuck to Marcia's back. The action seems to follow the girls as they enlarge, so their height remains constant while the world around them shrinks. Maybe a couple POV descriptions would be welcome, what the humans see when they look up at the enormous women.

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