Reviews For Catfight XL
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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: February 14 2013 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 7

I did notice a few plot holes but I think I'll leave it at that.



Author's Response:

Oh, tell me. I plan to write a sequel, and I am willing to explain a few things then :)

Reviewer: Aborigen Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 16 2011 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 7

"...but the fight was and Marian back in the ship over before a nuke was fired." Lines like that need to be tightened up, because they stand out against all the really good writing here. I did like the resolution and Luke's ingenuity. This is a creative series with some very good highlights and entertainment.



Author's Response:

Thanks! Corrected it.

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