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Date: August 14 2014 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 83: THIRD TIME PLUCKY

A-ha! Triplets, and a high-tech device. Nice plot twists.

Author's Response:

And he was trip-trip-tripped up by them for a while.

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Date: August 11 2014 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 81: A POCKETFUL OF RED

Well, if he's not going to be vengefully shrunken by what fantasy fiction authors call "True Magic," then I can only assume Ms. Sinclair will turn out to be the heiress to some kind of chemical company. ;-)

Author's Response:

Another example of better shrinking through chemistry?

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Date: August 11 2014 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 79: ABSENT FROM SCHOOL

From kid-bit to tidbit. How humiliating!

Author's Response:

A review with a rhyming pun. How clever.

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Date: August 05 2014 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 77: TO KISS A CLOSE SHAVE

It was the John Steed version. A fifth season episode entitled "Who's Who???"

As for this chapter; brilliant!

Author's Response:

5th Season. Must have been colour with Emma Peel. I do remember that the final episode of that season had a great plot for this site; Steed being shrunken by a device and rescued by normal sized Emma Peel (surprising for a usually down to earth show), and not so useful for us, the reverse scenario when he gets his full size back and she's shrunken later in the episode.

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Date: August 04 2014 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 75: CHOKE MATE IN SEVERAL MOVES

I was wrong???

*Snaps fingers in half-serious disappointment.*

Author's Response:

But it's nice to be fictionally surprised.

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Date: August 04 2014 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 73: THE GAMES BEGIN ANEW

Thus begins Babette's first "sub-Rosa" meeting with Henry.

Author's Response:

Another great pun. What can I say?

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Date: August 04 2014 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 71: TRAIN OF HOPES

Thanks for the advance warning about the previous legion of chapters. I'm now off to the next one.

Author's Response:

btw, by 1960s Avengers, did you mean the Grantray Lawrence Marvel Super Heroes cartoons which adapted Avengers comics into the solo characters' serieses, or the British series with John Steed?

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Date: July 30 2014 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 32: THE SEA SAPPHIRE

*Takes preliminary look at supplementary chapters; grabs at sparse remainder of his hair; and screams in fright.*

"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!"

Author's Response:

Well if you follow the cues in chapter notes, you can skip most of them...

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Date: July 28 2014 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 30: THE LIMITATIONS OF CALAMARI

My head is "swimming" with these new complex details. ;-)

Author's Response:

something fishy about that joke, but at least it's more original than this one.

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Date: July 24 2014 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 28: THE PERILS OF YAWNING

GTS-Gene?! Is that the Marine Musician's real name?*

*Serious question, this time.

Author's Response:

No, actually the early chapters of Captain Miniature (which were done years ago, long before I finally recently got back to this story) explained (in satire of X-men), that guys with the gts-gene had the genetic ability to shrink and teleport and grow back to normal size. Women with the gts gene have the ability to grow to giant size and shrink back to normal size. All of them have some variation of vore fantasy too. Some of the women are also able to teleport to parallel earths, at least from certain points, like the Garden Gateway, but the chapters dealing with parallel earths are yet to go up.