[Report This]Date: November 28 2011 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
Chapter 4 was much better. Great writing!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: November 27 2011 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sorry, that last review was meant for chapter 3, not chapter 1.
Date: November 26 2011 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hmmm.
From a Giantess standpoint, this chapter was amazing.
Form a writing standpoint, I found it a little too fast. There wasn't as much suspense to this growth as there was to one's in your past stories. It didn't 'flow' as well as some other things of yours that I have read.
Just some constructive criticism, good chapter besides that one point.
Author's Response:
Well thank you for the comments! I've had some difficulty with this story. It's really venturing into uncharted waters for me as a writer, but regardless of how it turns out I think I've learned a lot from it. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: November 24 2011 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 3
very interesting indeed.. great chapter !!
cant wait till chapter 4
aaron
[Report This]Date: November 22 2011 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 2
very interesting. wonder where this tale will go.
aaron
[Report This]Date: November 22 2011 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 2
Fantastic start Littlrmac. I'm really looking forward to another story from you.
[Report This]Date: November 21 2011 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 2
This is an incredibly well-written story. I am enjoying it. Incest is not my favorite genre, but this is a little easier to handle since it is a "step mother" and not a birth mother. And of course because your prowess as a writer is superb. I eagerly await the next installment.
Author's Response:
That's sort of how I feel about it as well- it being a taboo subject and all. I've made sure to continually address it throughout the story in what I hope is a realistic manner. Thank you for giving this a chance even though it's not your cup of tea, I really appreciate that. The next chapter will be up soon.
[Report This]Date: November 21 2011 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, another great chapter! How often will you be updating, these cliffhangers always get me wanting the nexy chapter.
Author's Response:
Glad to see you're enjoying it. I will almost certainly update every few days (2-4). I don't like to wait long when I'm reading, so I don't expect my readers to. Especially with cliffhangers- that's just mean!
[Report This]Date: November 21 2011 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
DAMN you can write. Keep this up please. Can not wait to read more
Author's Response:
Thank you! I try my hardest to write good stuff, and I will most definitely keep this up.
Date: November 19 2011 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
Was really excited to see your new story! A great start, and it seems even more promising than the last few you've written. Can't wiat to see how it turns out.
Author's Response:
I've got some fun stuff planned. This is a smaller story, characters and setting wise. Leaves lots of room for exploration.
Date: November 19 2011 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm pretty psyched to see you starting a new story. Love all your other work.
Author's Response:
Thank you for remembering me, I hope I don't disappoint!
Date: November 19 2011 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
Uh-oh! Something tells me Dale is going to be in a world of trouble! This is a good start to a most-intriguing story. I am curious to see where this will go and looking forward to more.
[Report This]Date: November 19 2011 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
good start. cant wait to see where it goes from here.
aaron
Date: November 19 2011 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting beginning...though I wonder what is causing Cheryl's hunger ;)
Author's Response:
Stay tuned ;) Thanks for reading!