Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: November 25 2011 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 1

It's a nice story but it;s really short. You really need to focus on adding detail and perhaps expand each individual section into a whole chapter. You should work on building proper paragraphs. I'm not too fond of giant men so whether I will read more I can't say.

I really hope I wasn't too harsh but I do strongly roeccomend reading the "writing tools" section of giantessworld.