Date: November 23 2015 9:00 AM Title: Mars Versus Venus, Chapter 1
I wish you would continue these stories maybe make Kristan the one incharge of all the shruken people again. At 1 in she sould be able to fit them all inside of her now.
[Report This]Date: December 27 2012 1:47 PM Title: Mars Versus Venus, Chapter 1
Love it!!
Date: November 17 2012 4:07 PM Title: Mars Versus Venus, Chapter 1
Read this story again. An was wondering if there is going to be anymore updates?
aaron
Date: February 26 2012 4:56 PM Title: Mars Versus Venus, Chapter 1
Lol I just realized That I misplaced I letter.. It's 'Game of Thrones'
It's fictional series about knights kings an junk light that. Very good because of the acting an scenery although there is alot of backstabbing that happens(hints the title, I guess) which I don't really care for but it keeps me hooked an wanting to know more.
An u watched 'green lantern on syfy channel.. Its nothing like the garbage movie that recently came out I hope..
I'll have to check it out.
aaron
Author's Response: Oops, I suppose it was the garbage film. Understand I am severely behind on proper cinema critique training. I just saw my 1st 3d and when did popcorn become more expensive than lobster?
Date: December 15 2011 8:16 PM Title: Mars Versus Venus, Chapter 1
glad your writing again, I really like this story. I was just hoping you can add a sceene where both people are actualy all the way in side the giantess and are discribing living in her or what is it like inside her while giving her pleasure. I world be very gratefull if you did that. Please keep wirting.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the glowing review, Slacker28. Writing my new story has been enjoyable, and gets the brain cells humming in harmony. Thank your thoughts on how to create a romantic scene with a vivid description to bring it to life.
Date: December 13 2011 6:03 PM Title: Mars Versus Venus, Chapter 1
Marcus is quite a bit more fortunate then most shrunken people considering the giantesses he's been around so far. I'm a little curious what would have happened if Marcus had been one of the shrinkies that hates being inserted.
Author's Response: Marcus is a man who loves women, but will resist vengeful insertion strenuosly and great futility!
[Report This]Date: December 13 2011 7:11 AM Title: Mars Versus Venus, Chapter 1
pps are you planning an epilogue for 'ranger joe's tiny adventures'? cause that story was remarkable. an id love to read more of it.
aaron
Author's Response: I broke my promise long ago to continue Ranger Joe's Adventures but will catch up with him soon. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: December 08 2011 3:28 AM Title: Mars Versus Venus, Chapter 1
Most impressive. Reminds me of how some stories were wrote when I first found the GTS community years back.
Author's Response:
Thanks, MKU. I am far from infallible in my writing skills, but if I choose to post a story, I want it to be understood. I do not want to leave the reader frustrated and confused. In other words, I am long-winded!
[Report This]Date: December 07 2011 10:08 PM Title: Mars Versus Venus, Chapter 1
awesome story. an great to see you back.
aaron
Author's Response:
Thanks, aaron. Writing a story such as "A Small Step for Mankind" allows my fertile imagination to run wild in the vast universe of verse. I am glad others can enjoy it as much as I enjoy writing it. A story like this takes me 50-75 man hours, including all the corrections and tweaking, so it is an investment. Not all stories posted here appeal to me personally, but it is interesting to see others' ideas. Also, it is great when we can make a good connection with each others perceptions. See, the writing mode makes me more cerebral than I should be for normal daily life!
[Report This]Date: December 07 2011 10:13 AM Title: Mars Versus Venus, Chapter 1
This is a very nicely done story. I certainly hope that sequal chapters will follow.
Author's Response:
Thanks, DrCreep. I have the rest of the plot brainwaved, and will work to get it posted in the next 10 days. I fixed a few minor grammer errors in 1st chapter. The 2nd posting should be close to the same length as the 1st Chapter.