Date: December 12 2014 12:30 AM Title: Doctor Small and the Kangaroo Court
Love the story. The early part with Kate when he is small and not tiny was well done. The scene when Sophia first finds the little house was chilling. Fantastic real life story. Loved the test tube idea. Looking forward to more,
Diesel
[Report This]Date: February 25 2012 7:25 PM Title: Doctor Small and the Kangaroo Court
Chapter was great. An I loved the meeting of the little women Ha! An the whole him eavesdropping was genius. So glad that you put that in there, an I thought it was hilarious that the tiny females immediately tattled on him. Glad that his punishment was very light-hearted. Cant wait to see what happens next. Hope it'll be a sophia heavy chapter.
Also, the part where he fell in her new bra on the windowseal an her crying reaction was inspired. I'm so glad to see that she actually cares for him, an it makes sense that the 'mommies' would claim his assets his house, money, etc.
An when you said jealousy I figured it was with one of the goddesses. Never in a million years would have thought it would have been his tiny friend. Very cool.
aaron
Ps I'm watching 'game of thornes' HBO on demand. Very good show. IMO.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the read and review, aaron. When I finished Chapter 3, I had brainwaved this chapter much different than what was posted. Sophia received a second chance to share love with her former husband. With his macho pride crushed and evaporated, she could at last become the center of his psychological universe. This chapter turned out to be fun writing once I set sail. The final chapter will also be heavy on fun and passion filled.
Ps "game of thornes sounds interesting. I just finally watched "The Green Latern", which was also a very good sci fi, with a leading lady extemely fine, indeed. However, I do not support an ending which leaves the viewer 100 percent certain of a pending sequel. The obession with future riches is poison to the creative process.