Reviews For Mommy's Time-Out
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Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: February 11 2018 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 3: Time-Out Begins

Love how slowly and calmly she places him in her shoe. You describe the inside of her shoe very well. He climbs but with a simple tilt, in he goes. This is fantastic.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 20 2012 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 3: Time-Out Begins

great story so far. love his mom toe nail color, as well as ella's reaction to the whole thing. on to chapter 4

aaron

Reviewer: Jay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 18 2012 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 3: Time-Out Begins

Oh, I'm aware of your reluctance to have your "hero's" lives end at the feet (insert body part) of their tormentresses.  That said, I imagine this story will be fairly short, as it seems rather straight-forward in scope. If you have the son live, I love to see him ruined emotionally from his mother's feet. But, hey, you know my by now to know I like these things to begin all sunny and fun, only to end on a dark note! Thank for the great read so far.

Reviewer: Seabee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 17 2012 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 3: Time-Out Begins

This is an extremely well-written chapter.  It's not often that I have to consult a dictionary while reading a fetish story (i.e., "sudor").  Very well done, my friend!  I am very anxious to read more, and can't wait to see Ella's ultimate reaction to what she has witnessed.  Thanks for continuing it.



Author's Response:

thanks for reading, glad you liked it; i like trying to mix up the vocab to keep it all from getting stale with the same words over and over

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