Date: February 11 2018 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 5: Ella's Time-Out
Having Ella placing her foot in was Awesome. Her toes crushing his genitalia and everything else. Your description was fabulous. He knew the incredible difference between Mrs. Stevens toes and Ella's. Their relationship will never be the same.
Author's Response:
Always nice to get reviews on older stories. Glad you enjoyed.
Date: February 11 2018 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 5: Ella's Time-Out
Loved your description as her foot leaves the shoe. The initial burst and then it leaves. The description of what it's like to be battling her big toe for an hour. It made me feel like I was there. The long shower to try to get the smell out. An awesome idea. I would think the smell would be all up inside you. I don't think a shower would wash it away. Really loving this.
Date: October 12 2012 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 5: Ella's Time-Out
Your stories are always amaizing, hope you keep writing.
[Report This]Date: January 20 2012 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 5: Ella's Time-Out
love this story. glad that his loving girlfriend got to experience it.
an loved the fact that her feet smelled wonderfully.
hope to see more stories like this in the future from you.
aaron
[Report This]Date: January 20 2012 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 5: Ella's Time-Out
A well written story, too bad it's not a little longer! IMO, I'd work on Freshman.
Author's Response:
thanks for the reviews man. i will at some point revisit these people just for fun, since the story is so short
Date: January 20 2012 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 5: Ella's Time-Out
Great story. Well, all of your storys are great :)
I'd love to see the Blackmail one continue, or a new story based on a teenager slowly shrinking.
I feel that with your writing, and slowly building up events, along with creating the perfect characters; you'd create the best slowly shrinking story ever!!
You're the best!!
Author's Response:
an interesting idea... although at the rate i'm writing, i doubt a new story will show up for a loooong time. :P thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts!