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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: October 13 2015 12:03 AM Title: The First to Go

Or maybe he didn't want to save your life because he knew you were sleeping with another person?

Reviewer: femfeetlicker Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 20 2012 9:07 AM Title: The First to Go

Going better, but I wish she crush people barefoot.



Author's Response:

I'm going to have more! I promise!

Reviewer: Aborigen Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 18 2012 3:56 PM Title: The First to Go

You're very strong on dialogue. I like that you can create genuine conversations and that each of the characters sound consistent. Try not to form sentences with complicated, winding structure--just state what happens. If a sentence runs too long, think about breaking it up into two or three.



Author's Response:

Thank you! Yea i've noticed i have that problem.....

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