Date: March 13 2023 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 8
Nice story of a gentle giantess, with the setting reminding one of Gulliver's travels. I have to agree, playful and gentle is certainly appealing for some readers like you and me. The political satire is integrated well so as to interest readers without pulling them out of fantasy escapism.
Maybe it is because I'm a newcomer to the community, but I've gotten tired of all the violent GTS stories. It seems like the giantess/giant always becomes one dimensional, a being existing to torture and kill the tinies. Not that there is anything wrong with them, for I do enjoy them, but I long for a well-written gentle giantess story. One with an actual plot, which I have found in this story.
This is why reviewers like Shrimp seem not to understand that the GTS fetish isn't monolithic, and not everyone enjoys the same thing. I don't mean any offense to them when I say this, because I'm sure that they are trying to help according to their mindset. I'm glad that the author is open-minded on this subject. I believe that authors can write for themself and appeal to readers at the same time. A gift to write good literature, so why not use it for your own happiness? Readers like me will tag along in the meantime. Commendations, Author Pixis!
[Report This]Date: June 04 2017 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 8
Give the tinies a brownie and take them on a plane! I'd love to see how they would react.
Date: June 06 2012 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 8
Well at least it had a happy ending.
[Report This]Date: June 01 2012 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 8
Hey! Anybody as prolific as you usually are deserves a rest break, now and then. So, take as long as you need. And, thanks for sharing this serio-comic epic with us.
It was a pleasure reading it. Believe me! :-)
Author's Response:
Thanks, Cary.
[Report This]Date: June 01 2012 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 8
Was a great end to the piconorean part on the little island. If indeed you do continue(and I hope you do) I'd like to see Vera an her little travelers arrive at her home instead of with the giant brogdab......(or however it's spelled). I just feel that there will be far more opportunities in the human world for the tinies apposed to the giant one(this is my opinion of course so whatever happens happens).
Anyways this story has been a great journey and an all around finaminal tale. Hope that your hiatus isn't too extensive.
aaron
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. Glad you liked it. If and when I continue this it will indeed be in the human world, not a Brobdingnag-type setting. Though I was inspired by Gulliver's Travels, I wouldn't want to simply recreate the whole book.
Date: June 01 2012 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 8
Great Story !!!!! I would very much love to see many follow-on stories with Vera leading the Piconoreans on most fruitful and pleasurable explorations around Vera home world.Also I be really hot for them all to carefully set up constant two way travel business between vera world and The Piconoreans .Of course only other people of vera world that will treat the Piconoreans right .Should be trusted to know the Piconoreans exist'let alone the way to the Picoreans world.Please take to heart all of the above."Thanks" much !!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks. Not sure if two-way travel between the worlds is a good idea. Humans and Piconoreans can't even get along amongst themselves sometimes. Putting them together could be trouble.
Date: June 01 2012 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 8
Just wanna add one more thing: I hope you weren't discouraged from continuing this story because of all the negative reviews I've read here. I've read through all of them and (this is just my opinion) maybe the reviewer should try reading something else more to his taste - like any of the several hundred violent GTS stories on here. I never read those stories, but I also don't give them endless negative reviews just because their subject matter doesn't interest me.
Please don't be discouraged, this story couldn't be more fantastic - unless it were to continue, that is! ;-)
Author's Response:
There were other factors. As I said, I'm dealing with some real world problems and that's not a good headspace to be in when trying to write. And it wasn't so much the negative reviews that bothered me as the debate about the role of an author (pleasing others vs. staying true to oneself). There was a pretty big philosophical difference there.
In any case, glad you enjoyed the story. I'll get around to the Piconoreans' adventures in the human world eventually.
[Report This]Date: June 01 2012 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 8
The best ending of any of your stories, in my opinion. The amount of possibilities it opens up to is endless. I would probably kill to find out what happens next, even if it's just one chapter. But I realize how distracting real life factors can be ( my own writing has diminished quite a lot recently, I must admit) - even so, I hope you find the time and desire to continue this story, since it is such a wonderful tale.
Date: June 01 2012 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 8
loved the story. i would have enjoyed more worship, but overall i enjoyed the story. THANK YOU