Reviewer: LJin Signed [Report This]
Date: August 03 2013 8:42 PM Title: After Dinner

I understand why people are feeling sorry for him, I would be more surprised if most wouldn't. Well, I also felt sorry for him sometimes. Also feel the overwhelming feeling of power, confidence and excitement Michelle feels each time she grows or realizes how much more of her fills his mind and body.

And this is exactly why immersion is such a wonderful thing. To almost feel what he feels, all the humiliation and such. I believe Michelle have a massive crush on Nicky. A very very unhealthy one. I believe she truly wants to own him. What most people forget is that 'love' isn't always demonstrated in caring gestures and acts. Nicky had his chance to have a gentle Michelle in the past, but he was a dick. He humiliated her, he hurt her both physically and mentally in a cruel way. But she is very very clever and intelligent, I think she realized this type of approach wasn't the right one to have him. To truly have Nick Avery for herself.

Now Nicky have to pay for his mistakes, and endure this new Michelle. The towering goddess who found the perfect way to break him and have the man she wished. I would be more sad if she turned to be all gentle with him right now, I would feel inclined to stop reading. Don't get me wrong, I love gentle stories. But I it would be so weird, for me, not making any sense if Michelle suddenly changed her approach to the old one. Nick over and over showed how much he 'tries' in vain to take advantage of her fake gentle side. She knows this. He just want her to be his trophy, he don't want to belong to her. I don't know how much of what I said is true, it is what I believe.

This is why, even though it's not my fave genre, I'm loving this story. Because its make sense to me, its exciting and well written. This is what separates a good story from a bad one for me. And this is a wonderful one.

 

Just my thoughts. Heh n.n Don't mind what I say, I just like, and feel the need, to speak/write what is in my mind sometimes.

Author's Response:

Well, I recall you like gentler stories, so I'm glad (and a bit surprised) you're still enjoying this one.  I get what you're saying and it's a really interesting way to look at it actually.  I can neither confirm nor deny what you said at this point :P.  But what you said might come into play in an interesting way (I hope it's interesting, anyway...)