Wow.

I always knew that I had a thing for the violent and dominant giantess. But this stuff has opened my eyes quite a bit. It made it better that I lived with a French girl called Camille for a year... although she did match Penny's description moreso.

Oh, and you said that Cody was on the bed, and Camille was gyrating on him... but you never mentioned that he got up. You just went on to say that Penny poked him angrily before crushing his toes. In my head, he was still on the bed, which made me stop for a second... it's the only thing that took away from the flow of the story.

Loved the fact that when Cody woke up, he didn't realise he was small, and tried to think up a means of escape for himself and Camille. It was a really nice touch that Camille knew of the shrinking beforehand. I loved how it dawned on him.

Strange confession, I found the part where Erinn wiped the remains of Camille on her pants to be erotic, I have no idea. Feel free to laugh at me.

I didn't really like Sean all that much, it was like he was overcompensating to be in the dominant male role. That, and I didn't like how the whole lead up with Cody, only to be discarded in a waste bin. I felt cheated, I thought that he would have had a much more interesting demise than to be crushed by a terrible role player.

That said, it was an enjoyable read... but it doesn't beat one of your other stories. I have to say, my ideal woman, is currently a few inches tall, and bound to a stupid wizard. I'll give you a clue, she's also a demon.

Thornton