Reviews For Those Damn Yankees
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Reviewer: LilBeni Signed [Report This]
Date: September 06 2012 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 5

Gonna be brutally honest. The ending was too soon, lacking previous charm, and an overall letdown (like you were in a hurry). I know you're capable of doing much better. Sorry, my friend.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05 2012 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 5

Not a bad little ending...granted he died but at the foot of a goddess which was better then what happened the night before.

Reviewer: TiniestofSparks Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05 2012 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 5

Now that's a fucking ending! Groans from pain and pun alike interweaving to make art. That ending will stick in my memory for quite some time!

 

You really nailed the GT and couples themes here exceedingly well in my opinion, and the forced bi was tastefully done and executed. Love your style of humiliation and domination.

You can safely take a seat amongst my favorite size authors now.

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