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Reviewer: LilBeni Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 13 2016 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 1

SO GOOD, MAN!!!

Reviewer: Gadget91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 04 2013 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

Dear god I love this story. It is so cruel and hot at the same time!



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I'm so glad you approve of it!

Reviewer: racheywriter899 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 12 2012 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 1

Thats a messed up story i would hate to have a boyfriend like that! and her bestfiend is suchs  a slut there should be a sequel where ben gets revenge on lucy for killing his girlfriend and his excuse can be he was lost in the ecstacy of the moment and thats why he let lucy torture his girlfirend

Reviewer: carnaj2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 10 2012 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

Like the other Reviewers I loved this story. Happy to see 'Couples' myself and some male/Giant involvement. Makes it seem more real in the interaction.

The writing was great as was the conversation. Just a couple punctuations but nothing that distracted from the tale. I thought perhaps Ben sided w/ Lucy a bit too quickly, but understand he was caught up in the heat of her sexual advances so it worked.

I am usually not a huge fan of stories that end with the death of the tiny, whether crushed, eaten, whatever. The Giants usually have so much fun torturing the Tiny, and it seems that Killing the Tiny would end that fun. But like I said, this one worked. The flow of the story was such that it seemed the logical end.

Great job and hope you will do something similar in the future. Thanks!!

Carnaj

 

Reviewer: Tiny_Aylia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06 2012 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

I actually really loved this story. I'm usually not too fond of couples stories and tend to be picky with them but this one was really good. I especially loved the scene when they were poking and jabbing at her ribs as it gave a real sense that she was nothing more than a toy a game to them. The descriptions of the girl being a goddess were also really well done. And I must admit ending just cinched this for me. I hope to see more of your work like this.

Reviewer: fated11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06 2012 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 1

amazing story. This is just the type of story I hope to see when I visit the site.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: July 05 2012 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 1

I've done giant couples rp's before here and there but you bring the whole thing into an artform little lady.

 

Another well done story. I liked how they went from caring souls to brutal tyrants in the span of a few moments.

 

*pats your head giving you a cookie*

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