Hey, this is the guy who loved the ending of your first story so much he reviewed it twice. Yeah, I will admit it, I have been a fan of your work ever since Party Time. This return of my arguably favorite all-time protagonist from this site was met with much mental fanfare, and you delivered here. Since I was unable to review this story during it's writing, I'll just review the full thing here. The switch-off between gentle, ympathetic giantess with cruel master who taught the giantess from the first story herself was flawless and brilliant, as I can enjoy a gentle story almost as much as what Brenda indulged in. Plus all those times Brenda tried to get Marissa to "come to the dark side" were the magni opi of the story, brilliant vore scenes that mixed soft and hard, willful and unaware in a quilt of swallowy goodness. The bug fight at the end was definitely an unexpected pleasure, insect interaction is something you'd expect but rarely get from a genre that is all about being shrunk. My only complaint is that your second story also ended with the main giantess being shrunk and given to another giantess (Gloria shrunk and given to Sarah in 1 and Brenda shrunk and given to Marissa in 2), which kinda seems a bit cliche. Not a real big deal, just a little personal peeve. I am glad however that you didn't have Marissa suddenly change charater and acta ll violent just to kill Brenda off. In total, Kickyou, what you have here is a masterwork, Now I beseech you to answer this humble gts fiction author's plea: Oh mighty Kickyou, will you answer the yearing of your readers and give us a third installment of Mike-and-giantess literary excellence?

Can you do more with Marrisa please? And more mike?

wht kind of kid picks up a spider to watch it battle, tht shit is scary lol. I would of found a pincher bug not a freaking spider. srry for the rant lol great to see the story back :)

is that unwilling pred i sense coming? :D

Kickyou, you have guts. Coming off your smashing sucess with "Let the Games Begin", here you are pumping out three different new stories. Including this sure-to-be-good sequel to your best story. I wasn't quite sure what you meant when you mentioned Sarah occasionally shrank people at the end of LTGB, and this cleared that off. I thought you had meant she occasionally shrunk people for similar reasons as Gloria, but that wouldn't really fit with the Sarah character. I like that you instead have her occasionally shrink Mike pof his free will, and have themhave a normal relationship otherwise. I really want to see where this is going to go sizewise. So far it's rather well-done. Keep it cominmg Kickyou!