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Reviewer: fated11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 01 2012 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 3

Love the ending. what a way to go

Reviewer: Afroking Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28 2012 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 1

 

Another story! damn your head must be hudge coming up with all these great stories. I will wait till u get a few ch deep then I will read your story. I love how u get me to feel for your main charachter aka hero or victim.

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 27 2012 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 2

Yes, following the set-up in the first chapter, this chapter has the action I was seeking.

Thank you , Kickyou.

I'm really looking forward to its continuation.

 

Reviewer: ShadowCross Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 27 2012 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 1

Chapter 2 is great. Dialogue was necessary to setup the characters. Keep up the great work!

Reviewer: Maliardo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 27 2012 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 2

You are the freakin master at writing these. I look forward to looking at Most Recent and seeing your name pop up as one of the ones I have new read. All your stories so far have been some of the best ones I have read. Author of the year right here lol.

Reviewer: KushKing Signed [Report This]
Date: August 25 2012 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 1

gotta have dialogue to set up the characters and story man but good job so far cant wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed star [Report This]
Date: August 25 2012 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

So far...too much dialogue, not enough action.

I hope that it gets better. 

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