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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 07 2012 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 6

Funny! As I remember it, most freedom has had to be _fought_ for. Not so much well-earned as hard-won.

Author's Response:

I'm happy someone noticed that. That there little parenthesis was an afterthought, after I'd finished the chapter. Particularly fond of it (tho' I don't know how much it adds to the story, it's an indication -- maybe coming on a little too strong -- of just how far the protag's brain has deteriorated after five years).

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2012 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 6

I was curious when we were going to get to see a tiny woman added in. This really is becoming one of my favorite reads of all time.



Author's Response:

I haven't written about tiny/shrunken women yet, but I'll try to develop her over the next couple of chapters. Meredith will stay until the end, I'm pretty sure (which may be next week or the week after). - D

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