Reviews For Adela
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Reviewer: LJin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 15 2012 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 13

I am trying to understand Holly and Adela, but with each new chapter these characters seem to grow more rich and complex. Its driving me crazy. Hah Especially Holly, I am still trying to figure what future she holds for Martin, from many things I can think of, some may seem kinda obvious others not so much... Maybe he is indeed the kind of good boy she seeks, like she said, the kind of slave (or pet) she desires to keep to help with certain tasks or feelings that only a very few people in ours lives can fill. Maybe. She seems like a very lonely woman after all. From the way she talked with her husband, and her feelings about him and their marriage with Martin, at the first chapter, seemed to be an event which marked her life and she can't forget. Enough to keep him with her during all this time and put these emotions into physical punishment against him. Just my thoughts.

 

I am loving your story and your writing style. Thank you for sharing with us. n.n



Author's Response:

I like your thoughts about Holly, in particular. I think that's hammer to nail analysis.

I'll post another chapter tonight, when I get time away from work.

--scrymgeour

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 13 2012 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 13

Our little crazy chick is gaining a heart?

 

Very interesting read.



Author's Response:

Yep. Though it's raisin-sized, for the moment.

Thanks again for your review.

--D

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