[Report This]Date: December 30 2020 7:54 PM Title: Chrome
Great story read it a while back and came back to reread it again. Rare to find stories featuring just story elements so its refreshing to read this story. It has a lot of potential and I wish you could continue writing this story. Seeing that you have been on hiatus for 7 years though might be a little while before you pick this story up again.
Date: March 17 2018 9:28 PM Title: Chrome
“The human stared blankly at the wall and I was sure I saw tears streaming down his face. He was like this for several minutes before he rubbed at his eye with the back of his wrist.”
What flashbacks look like to their characters.
[Report This]Date: September 10 2017 7:34 PM Title: Chrome
11/10 story. Please write more. I'm begging you.
Date: October 16 2015 9:49 AM Title: Chrome
Are you ever going to pick this up?
Date: January 05 2013 6:26 AM Title: Chrome
wow i am in love with your story!!! the growing friendship between them is so cute! and i am attepmting to write a story like yours because it was so inspiring i hope you update real soon!!!
Date: October 29 2012 9:43 PM Title: Chrome
Hi I really think You have a great story going here when will u please be updating it I hope you will be any ways and thank you for sharing with us!
[Report This]Date: September 28 2012 8:50 PM Title: Chrome
Love the story, can't wate until the mouth play part, yoy said you liked it. I only have a few complaints: I don't really know what the characters look like would like more character discription like face and eyes "and boobs" of humans and giantess yes I am a perve, what they are wearing "I get the sence that the giantess is not wearing shoes" and if possible insersion would be nice you know as a way of storing the humans and keeping them warm. But only if it works I don't want you to mess with a good story. I hope you update soon I like the story.
Date: September 14 2012 8:55 AM Title: Chrome
Welcome to giantessworld! I prefer gentle stories too, and once I've finished writing that story for my friend (who is a giantess) I will update my unfinished story (hopefully). I don't think she'll eat me or anything if I don't get it done, but I did make a pledge. If it was somebody else then maybe things might turn nasty...and I have a habit of overanalyzing situations, so please forgive me.
A nice start and I do like the story so far, though there are a couple of things. A good thing is to always put any speech on separate lines to the description. This makes your story easier to follow. It's not a big issue however in places which have longer paragraphs I feel it helps the reader.
I remember I had an idea for a story once with changing perspectives between chapters. I like the idea of two perspectives so long as it isn't constant, because a story isn't like a TV show or cartoon and some people forget that. My idea was to base a giantess a story on the cartoon known as "Tom and Jerry" but this never materialized.
Someone said to me once, "reading is the best way to improve writing abiltiy". I'm not sure if that's true or not, but in addition to reviewing the stories of others you could take a gander at the "writing tools" section of giantessworld. I found it quite helpful when I first came here, and I feel my stories have gradually improved over the years that I've been a member.
I think that's everything I wanted to say. I'll contact you if I think of anything else.
Author's Response:
Thanks. I've been messing with the dialogue and trying to fix it as you suggested.
Author's Response:
Thanks. I've been messing with the dialogue and trying to fix it as you suggested.
Date: September 13 2012 4:24 PM Title: Chrome
I like the change of perspective between characters. makes the story more interesting. good luck:)