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Reviewer: Grandmaster B Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 22 2018 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 1

I know im a few years late but I really liked this story. Not many stories that end with a happy ending. Im a sucker for stories where the characters love each other instead of the usual dominat/hate stories. Really enjoyed that the shrunken girls where forgiven and fell in love with the their new owners/lovers. Didn't see that ending coming better than expected.



Author's Response:

Never too late! Thank you!

I've had other reviewers complain about AWBB being "nothing but sex." This site is about a sexual fetish! Why wouldn't there be sex?

If men suddenly became smaller than women, I could envision a few acts of hateful vengeance. But I can't imagine they would all turn into monsters. I think most would try to find a way to rebuild the world. They would want relationships with their tiny men. They would want to love and enjoy sex with their tiny men, especially after the Goddess upped their sex drives. 

I think that if all the men got small, it would give the women a chance for a world with sexual fulfillment without fear. A fearless woman would feel very sexy. 

I didn't see that ending coming either. I was ready to wrap up the story when the State gymnasts got shrunk and lost their identities. But it seemed too cruel. Looking back, I think it gave the University gymnasts... the ones whose boyfriends were stolen... the chance to "grow". They started out right after the Rebalancing hit with jealousy over their lost boyfriends, trying to get them back. In effect they were worried about scarcity of men and lovers. Then when they succeeded, and won their rivals as sex slaves, and saw their defeated enemies as human beings, they began to see their sexuality not as a thing of scarcity but a situation of abundance. Their bodies sprawled, large enough to take a tiny man and a tiny woman as lovers, and with enough passion left over to take a normal sized lover girl as well. They became generous, sharing their sex with their tiny boyfriends and their tiny rivals. 

It is so fun so see these tiny girls, dead to the world, come back to live because the bodily fluids of the women who possessed them made them fall in love in spite of themselves. 

Another theme I enjoyed writing about was tiny partners making love where none existed. Women have been forced to try to do this throughout history. The heroine of Arabian Nights had to tell her husband a story every night to keep him from killing her. She was forced into her situation but made something loving out of it, against all odds. I especially developed this theme with the man who was taken by Amber's mother. He didn't want a woman several years older to become his captor and his life, but fellow tiny Jason showed him how to make the most of it, and led him to fall in love with the woman who took him out of the big world. 

Please take time to enjoy the other stories in the Rebalancing the Sexe series. I think you'll find a lot of love and a lot of happy endings!

Reviewer: shadowrust Signed [Report This]
Date: August 14 2015 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

After I finished reading this story, I immidiately started writing a fanfiction about it.

It's interesting to think about how society might change post rebalancing. I think the lesbians and gays would quickly become in charge of the new world (well besides the goddess).

I doubt that straight women have the attention span for poletics, or anything complex really. The straight women seem a bit too distracted by the attention they receive from little men to contribute to society in any way beyond simple labor.

I'ld like to post it to this site, with your permission.



Author's Response:

I think that's phenomenal! I'm honored and gladly give my permssion. Can't wait to read your story!  I really appreciate your getting into the consideration of how society would function after the ROS. Straight women would probably need a lot of attention from their men to get through the day, although size and numbers would probably give them a sort of power over other groups. (Of course, the men probably would consider politics beyond their sphere as well, as their world transforms and their workplaces become the secret places of their women's bodies.) Thank you!

Reviewer: vgiv Signed [Report This]
Date: August 26 2014 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 1

I thought this story was dead. I liked the first few chapters, but got turned off by nothing more than sex every chapter. Only character I honestly liked was Carmen, and she gets very little time on screen. But, I do love this at the same time, a light hearted story is needed once in a while.



Author's Response:

I know it's not everybody's taste. But I like a lot of sex and intimacy in the Rebalancing of Sexes universe. Part of what I like about the stories is how men and women find their way back to sexuality after such a tumultuous event. Carmen is a great character and she unashamedly enjoys the power that comes from being so much taller than men (and a few women), and being able to literally enclose them in her underwear and her sex. Both powerful and playful, as well as lustful, she just seems born to be a giantess. She may figure in another plotline in the story later on. 

Reviewer: TiniestofSparks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 31 2012 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

I just started this series today but that's the best NWO scheme I've read. Totally amped to read the next chapters!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and the 5 stars! It's part of a series called "Rebalancing the Sexes" and I hope you'll also check out and review the other stories in this series: "Rebalancing the Sexes", "Fear of Commitment" and "At the Feet of Our Wives."

Reviewer: ltltb Signed [Report This]
Date: December 26 2012 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 1

Afroking... I think I deleted your review of Chapter 18 by mistake!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 25 2012 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

For starters? Welcome back! I haven't read a new installment of this now-classic series in a long time. And, you clearly have not lost your touch.

:-)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 24 2012 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

On a slightly more serious note? You have the gym-nasty girls tying him up twice! Was that a blooper? Like, maybe, a sentence was accidentally omitted that had him almost breaking free before the freez-frame by the GOL?

Author's Response:

Hmmm... have to check that one...

Reviewer: scrymgeour Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 23 2012 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 1

Another interesting installment. Will follow where this goes.

Again, I have to say that I love all the possibilities this premise offers--comedy, tragedy, requited & unrequited love in a number of differents forms, etc.--depending on the couple, or group of individuals, you choose to concentrate on. (Well, that--and it's also a world where sex never gets boring.)

 



Author's Response:

I think that's the great part about this world... it never gets boring. Thanks for your support, and I hope you'll like what you see in following chapters.

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