Date: February 01 2013 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 2
Great! Grildrigian!
Author's Response:
I'm humbled to be compared to the great Scott Grildrig! Thank You! :)
Date: December 19 2012 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 2
HOLEY MOLEY BABY!!! This is GOOD, GREAT, EXCELLENT! Please continue this story. Don't stop only a few chapters in like many writers on this site seem to do. I'm sure it's hard to complete stories and obviously takes much dedication, but I am sure you are capable of it if you just keep at it! Anyways, such a thriller story! The only thing I might suggest is to please include more "singled out" scenarios, like that of the woman that was fighting for her life on the nipple. You are very good at those descriptive scenes. Maybe it's just me, but I find those small stories within the story to be HOT and full of sexy detail. Thanks for what you've wrote thus far. I really really enjoyed these first two chapters. Cannot wait to read more!!!!
Author's Response:
Well, I didn't expect such a good review. I obviously plan to complete this and if this is a success, to write a story about how it all began. I hope to add a new chapter every week or so, depending on how busy I am, but of course reviews such as this always encourage the writer.
Also, I think there will be a lot more 'singled out' scenarios in the next chapters since after the capital is destroyed, most of the population will disperse into rural areas out of fear, collapse of trade and general unrest. We have to wait and see :)
[Report This]Date: December 17 2012 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 2
A captivating story...
Usually, macro stories are pretty superficial; not holding my interest for very long. But this one is a very good story - lots of interest with a promiss of giantess sex thrown in. I'm really looking forward to its continuation.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it :)
Date: December 17 2012 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 2
I do like a lot of the descriptive language in this chapter although I'm wondering why you made the whole chapter have bold text. Also, is there is reason for all of this destruction?
Author's Response:
As I said in another reply, the text editor won't let me unbold the text for some reason, will try to fix it as soon as I can. And there is a pretty good reason for all this destruction, at least from the giantess' perspective. Let's just say that this story is more sci-fi than fantasy.
As for the descriptive language, I feel like it's still lacking since I just can't find the right words at times, I think I can do much better, but that will only improve as I keep writing.