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Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 02 2013 10:10 AM Title: 2: Playtime

Great story. Loved the plot an your use of 'big' words. It was a very welcomed change an I hope to see more stories from you.

aaron

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2013 1:16 PM Title: 2: Playtime

Not a fan of deaths at the end. But a good story nonetheless. I believe that you would do good writing a long story, like 7+ chapters.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the vote of confidence. This story was actually based on a collage on Giantessbooru that implied the death of the man, but I completely understand your preference. I really appreciate your objectivity.

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