Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: January 14 2014 1:54 PM Title: Epilogue

I have to agree, this is an excellent bit of backstory. Betty just got ten times better. Shrinking the scientists, and the mention of punishments (now I'm curious) did Betty wonders. It was clear that she's a schemer, but this establishes her as a proper villain. You mentioned that there are no windows, is there no door as well?

I just checked the Top Tens, and at 250 000 words it will be the fifth longest ever posted. That makes me very happy. I also like the note on your writing style. It sounds pretty good to me. You make a good point about not being the same person anymore. With that in mind, I think you're right in that it would be best not to mess around with it too much. It sounds to me like Season Two is going to be excellent.