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Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: March 03 2018 2:09 AM Title: Prologue

Super cool plot. I greatly enjoy your writing.

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: DontHaveAPenName Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2015 11:27 PM Title: Prologue

Are you gonna continue this or not when I devote more then 2 hours of my life reading a story like this expect a continuation and if you're currently working on it then I hope it's gonna be good

Reviewer: Wholia Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17 2013 3:47 PM Title: Prologue

Hallo:

I just want to say that I think your story is fantastic. The main character is really likeable and the whole setting is very interesting. I'm looking forwards to the next one. Good luck and congratulations.

Wholia.



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot, I'm happy that you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: alee Signed [Report This]
Date: March 02 2013 3:11 AM Title: Prologue

I kinda wonder if there is a situation where a guy who has survived from the war back in katie's time pops up just like katie did in this worrld that she is now. ANd that guy was shrunk but he managed to get away from the enemy.......(just a thought)

But hey its a BRILLIANT story, i have read yr previous ones and same compliment goes to them as well. PUHLEEZZZZ update this story SOONNNN



Author's Response:

Sorry it's taking so long to update, but it's been a busy few weeks. Next chapter's almost finished, though. As for the shrunken guy from the past idea, that's actually an idea I have for a future story, so you may see it someday ;-)

Reviewer: ltltb Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20 2013 4:04 PM Title: Prologue

Sounds like the mid-Atlantic states acquired their version of an alligator. To paraphrase a saying about gators and dogs, "Do you love your little human? So does that ishiloo!" few more victories like these and she'll soon have an army of worshippers and can start her own community if she likes. She's really even-keeled for the situations she's finding herself in.



Author's Response:

Yup, and she's got a long way left to go before this is over.

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 14 2013 12:05 AM Title: Prologue

Simply exsqusite writing!  I'm going to read all of your storys!  (just discovered you today(Ha,heh) 

All I can say is,....WOW!  



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'd like to hear what you think of some of my old stories as well, after you've read them.

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: February 13 2013 2:23 AM Title: Prologue

it's stories like this that remind me of why added you as a favourite author.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Stubbornstain!

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 13 2013 12:25 AM Title: Prologue

This story is awesome so far, I love how sassy Katie is, though he IS huge so...yeah. Though she sure likes telling the little people to treat her as an equal, even though she knows how to lay on the threats. Looking forward to new chapters of this, Peace!



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot! She's only threatening the guys who don't seem to like her, but, like she said at the end, she'll try and behave a bit better the next time.

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 12 2013 4:07 PM Title: Prologue

Taking advantage of the size difference, go Katie! But at least one little people settlement has to have something better than her(?)

Loving this story so far!



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm not sure what you mean by 'better than her' though. Another giant person, perhaps? Just curious

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 03 2013 5:06 PM Title: Prologue

Im liking this story a lot so far, great new chapter by the way!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: racheywriter899 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 29 2013 2:15 AM Title: Prologue

Sounds amazing please update soon!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'll try my best!

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 28 2013 10:06 PM Title: Prologue

What would the general population think if you told them you caught an upskirt view of the goddess you worship? Oh, you also have to mention the minor detail that ahe woke up from her long slumber. I would hope to be crowned High Priest and gain access to more"bonus'" like that.

Do ignore my rambling. Another great chapter Malaka!



Author's Response:

Upskirt views are going to become quite common for the little tinies, I'm guessing! As to the whole goddess thing, Katie's not really all for it. It might be fun for a while , though.

Reviewer: ltltb Signed [Report This]
Date: January 27 2013 3:41 PM Title: Prologue

A very promising story. A girl in a skimpy outfit becomes a goddess.



Author's Response:

Actulaay, she'll still be a girl in a skimpy outfit, just a lot bigger than everyone else, lol! Not everyone's going to think she's a goddess.

Reviewer: supernatural Signed [Report This]
Date: January 21 2013 11:28 PM Title: Prologue

a very agreeable opening like always, keep it up. it makes me want to pimp slap my government for trying to controle every one els and and the same time sounds fun.



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'll try to keep it fun and lighthearted, as soon as the 'serious' opening chapters are done.

Reviewer: Afroking Signed [Report This]
Date: January 21 2013 12:02 AM Title: Prologue

 

A 16yr old girl with a 22yr old BF? damn thats one fun future. lol



Author's Response:

Yup, :) standards will have changed a lot by then!

Reviewer: Dudemanguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 20 2013 7:31 PM Title: Prologue

Nice to see you come out with another piece of work Malaka. I know I'm going to follow this story.



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm looking forward to hear what you think of it.

Reviewer: jacksmith5996 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 20 2013 7:15 PM Title: Prologue

As usual, it's very refreshing to see a work by you pop up.  You have a very uncommon sense of how to establish an emotional connection for your main characters very early on without needing a whole lot of prefacing.  I enjoy your works in general but I particularly like those of yours that take place in a roughly modern setting, and this one looks to be a very solid piece.  Keep it up.



Author's Response:

Thank you! Stories with a modern setting are easier to write, but the reason I prefer to write stories with a fantasy/old world setting is because they are more what I like to read. I like to change it up every now and then, though.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 20 2013 5:28 PM Title: Prologue

Its a little hard to tell where your going with this story from only the first chapter but its a good start so far.



Author's Response:

The next chapter will go directly into where this story will take place. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 20 2013 4:01 PM Title: Prologue

Neat idea. An great to see ya back Malaka.

aaron

Author's Response:

Thanks, aaron!

Reviewer: Quicksilver Signed [Report This]
Date: January 20 2013 3:47 PM Title: Prologue

You've definitely got my attention.  I can only imagine at this point what percentage of the world ends up shrunken...whether the gas ended up spreading and shrinking people from the attacking nations too.  Really looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Looks like you thought of something the enemy army didn't, lol! Great review, thanks!

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