[Report This]Date: January 13 2019 9:48 AM Title: Wednesday: Smoke Break
I love suspense..and this has it in spades. Playful semi dangerous but gentle giantesses are the best!
Author's Response:
I hope the new additions are in line with what you're looking for. I've missed Tana and Archie, and it was time to come back and see what they're up to. Thanks for your support!
Date: March 10 2018 11:56 AM Title: Wednesday: Smoke Break
This was a good retrofit for Fairview. Neither Tana nor anyone else is shocked or mystified by the fact that she has a four-inch-tall co-worker, and the notion of Normie-Anthropole relations doesn't seem unheard of. He should have learned by now to keep an extra set of clothes or two at work, however.
There is a clear delineation between the older chapters and your recent work, but not discordantly so. In fact, the immersive and imminent descriptions of the beginning continue through the last chapter, but they are a bit more economical if no less prurient.
Looking forward to the performance review by Ms. Reynolds.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I too thought it was convenient for that world. I had no idea of the worlds when I started writing, but many of these stories are still based on the suitable premise.
I wondered how jarring it would be, to read the 20-year-old style and how I write now. Maybe most casual readers won't notice it at all.
[Report This]Date: March 05 2018 11:23 PM Title: Wednesday: Smoke Break
I kinda like this. A crazy, horny girl. Only, she was horny during the 2nd chapter and was expecting more of that.
I love your visual descriptions. I can easily picture what is going on and you explain a lot of the details.
I actually like the bossy change to her character. I also like the resistance that the main guy has to her.
This woman could easily be my favorite giantesses if she just gets more kinky and maybe ties him up to the front of her panties. Crazy and horny. She could hide him there while she works.
I would love to have a friend like Tana. Even her crazyness is kinda attractive to me.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it. If you were expecting a little more action, maybe Mr. Malina was too. Frustration all around, is the order of the day.